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PostSubject: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Tue Feb 14, 2012 2:01 am

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I have finished the first WEAK draft of the movie storyline. (Weak as in, I wrote it in a short time without thinking too much, not using
many linguistic features and also not including the settings used in the movie; this will be decided when we film as the setting isn't all that important right now especially since
there are going to be changes in setting as characters move around. Not to mention there were changes in past and present tenses which isn't usually a good idea when story telling but it's just a draft lolz. And not all the dialogue is there, I think it would be better if there were some dialogue in the beginning and middle, not just the end. Many other mistakes too.)

This is the first draft, just under 1.5k words. Read if you MUST. And if you do, please tell me what you think, what went well, what needs to be improved, suggestions to make it better, adding or taking things away etc. Restructuring, character roles, whatever, etc.
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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:14 am

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:17 am

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By book, I meant one sentence per page with a picture at the top, for those who didn't know what I meant. And that'll be a LOT of people.
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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:24 am

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By book, I meant one sentence per page with a picture at the top, for those who didn't know what I meant. And that'll be a LOT of people.
remember me dude?
i went on ur website im doc ock!
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I didnt know you joined. Bloo Dance

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:26 am

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:35 am

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ITS SATURDAY!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry random :bananalama:

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Mar 03, 2012 7:55 am

Anybody free to film this weekend?

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:37 am

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:33 am

I was thinking at about 10am EST (3pm GMT). If we can all make it, great!

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:56 am

I'll be sure to try to make it....where should we meet up at?

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:30 pm

I'll see what I can do. Make sure everyone, If you log in, open up separate window to the chat room here on Xtreme.

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:54 am

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I'll see what I can do. Make sure everyone, If you log in, open up separate window to the chat room here on Xtreme.

I'll be on seperate computers. Mine (For chat) and my sister's (for game). Makes it easier for me and I'm sure everyone by now knows the reason I can't play FF on mine.

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:54 am

No I didnt know that. One of my friends is addicted to Minecraft. I thought about trying it out though.

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sun Mar 04, 2012 2:46 am

Ok, I don't think we'd be able to film today. I gotta go in 15 mins anyway...

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Sun Mar 04, 2012 2:50 am

Alright. I just got hooked up too.

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:50 am

Est right?

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PostSubject: Re: 7 Legends story draft *SPOILER ALERT*   Wed Mar 07, 2012 8:40 am

Sorry about that. I ended up having to leave too.

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