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PostSubject: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:35 pm

Time Of Day Chapter 3
As they stopped the truck the young lad and mistress noticed a cave,
-"where are thou taking me." She asked in a serious tone
-"The Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out, we're not good with names so we didn't pick one" Grumpy chuckled.
As they entered the cave the 2 young men with white hair opened passage after passage. One of them had wings on his back, the other wore an elegant suit, they seemed to give off an intense aura.
-"Welcome to Xtremes. Names Hom, Hom Choi" Said hom who was the man wearing the suit.
-"Its really nice to meet another girl in xtreme, Undelos and zoe are gonna be all over you" Said the winged man, "names X, Xlr8, I'm the chief of this underground base."
-" You're one of us now Lin" smiled grumpy with a sparkle in his eyes.
-" That's grumpy, I wouldn't trust that smile, hes our most decieteful member, lures you in with his nice goody goody personality, after that you're toast" warned hom.
The base was like a high tech city, everything was a shiny grey, lights flickering everywhere everything you would imagine from a utopia, there sitting infront of an art shop were 4 guys and a girl.
"Heyy guys, newbie? That's like 5 now!" Shouted the girl, This is Undelos Rajeeta, known for her art and graphics making abilities, X's 3rd hand man, well woman, She wore a sweater,and a pair of large pants, both a shade of apple green, purple hair and a sycthe. With the ability to bring Alter egos Rex and Duhar to life, not to mention anything she draws.
"Correction, 4, we lost 3 of the new members already, being as there were 6 , now there are 4." Corrected A young lad with glasses, this was oliver zombieweasel, know as the most helpful tech support and known for posting the most knews on the xtreme network, he wore a white shirt, lights on the bottom, a black like in the middel, normal jeans, except that they could store anything using Pocket Dimmension technology, he's also a technopath, with this ability he can construct any new gismo within seconds, he has provided the Xtremists with almost all kinds off weapons,
"Well yeah, but who knows, maybe the secret war will finish soon" Said the oldest guy, one year younger then undelos, this was Vega, an armored soldier known for taking art and giving it visual effects, he gives Xtremeists their own signatures, these provide a way for them to stick out on the network. He is know for his will bending abilities, making anyone within a 20 mile radius become knocked out, stunned, or hypnotized but this one only applies to 1 person. After using this ability he has to wait 30 min to re use it, he is one of the back up plan soldiers.
"You guys shouldn't talk about those members, we hardly knew them but they were good people" exclaimed Ven, the guy with spikey hair, he's also a signature maker, he and vega are rivals but manage not to go into a fight, Ven is known for his super speed, reaching mock 5 and being able to vibrate through projectiles.
"GRUUMPYYYYY" yelled a girl with a cat hat who tackles him into the ground "did you write chapter 3 yet? I've been waiting foreverrrr" this skateboarder was Zoe Bioshine, specialized in making vehicles she has a bunch of hoverboards, hovercars, scooters, motorcycles, etc, Her ability is one you'd think a normal girl would have, singing, Being able to use magic melodies she can produce certain vocal patterns and notes that can cause explosions, knockout, paralysis, and even healing, She's shy to new people but once you know her she will be very open to having long conversations.
"I was on a mission, geez, but here, I brought a cookie" he said in a tired voice as he gave it to her.
"I wish to go home now, please, just take me home." Lin-ea cried.
"That's why we brought you, to take you home, it'll only take a few days." reassured X.
"Well where's she gonna sleep?" Rajeeta asked in a puzzled fashion.
"Have no fear, Target's herrreeee" Yelled a young lad from ontop of a roof, "Where's Lord sheepy?"
"Hey man, got your new gear I see" said grumpy.
Target wore a high class army suit, this protected him from bullets and explosions, his ability consists of teleportation, its range is limited but can be used rapidly, this armor jumps with him as he teleports, he like using a lazer stles ak-47, black hair and given the name Target sheep by grumpy.
"Thou expects me to live with thee, a boy?" she exclaimed
"Well I have a room next to mine, you could stay there, and it has a lockable door," said grumpy .
As the group walked we saw more members of the organization. Hawk knight, with the ability of having internal long range magic on his eyes, he has incredible sniping skills, sense his sniper rifles have no scope, he's known as the No Scope Master, being one of grumpys friends and right hand in command in the Grumpy Sheep Family Army, Sheep Hawk, next there was Officer, wearing his blue clothing and a joker fool hat, his grey wings cant give him flight but he has abnormal strenght. We also walked by the system, at first glance you'd think he was crazy next thing you now he ends up blowing your mind with his words, having the ability to put up forcefields he's in the frontline. Zero, a soldier who could equip any gun at any time that has been stored into his pocket dimension.
"Well it isn't a mention, but I thank thee, I hope I can repay your kindness" Said Lin-ea in a shy voice when I showed her to her room.
"No prob, here" he handed over a device "It links you to the network, we can all communictae from long distance, this helps us report news, events and pretty much anyhthing. I'm heading to my bed so night"
She sat there as the device slowly scanned her.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:42 pm

What, no Dane, (Xtremes most notable villains) lol, jk, great job, you described everyone so perfectly! ThumbsUp2
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:43 pm

Nice! I'll read it later, though. Gotta keep this place safe tonight, ya know?


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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:44 pm

you make it sound like im all hyper dude. and haha you got tackled by a girl!! Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:52 pm

There's no Xtreme Razor?

Or even a tool that can erase facial hair???? (No.)

Fine! Have fun with your crazy technology and your wonderful fan-art and stories that makes it worth reading and..The God...

I don't need any o you!!
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:58 pm

I thought me and x founded xtreme somthing:( Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Its ok ....really good story cant wait for next chap i better be some bad------ that goes around shooting evrythingg Too Funny

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Sun Jan 06, 2013 4:18 pm

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There's no Xtreme Razor?

Or even a tool that can erase facial hair???? (No.)

Fine! Have fun with your crazy technology and your wonderful fan-art and stories that makes it worth reading and..The God...

I don't need any o you!!


You forgot you and dane are eevviillll so youre not at Xtremes hide out lol, same with brad but he was in chapter 2, cut my arm.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:54 am

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you make it sound like im all hyper dude. and haha you got tackled by a girl!! Razz

lol yeehhh , couse you were probably wearing a helmet too LIES
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:26 am

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zoe bioshine wrote:
you make it sound like im all hyper dude. and haha you got tackled by a girl!! Razz

lol yeehhh , couse you were probably wearing a helmet too LIES
Excuses excuses

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:28 am

zoe bioshine wrote:
GrumpyTheRam wrote:
zoe bioshine wrote:
you make it sound like im all hyper dude. and haha you got tackled by a girl!! Razz

lol yeehhh , couse you were probably wearing a helmet too LIES
Excuses excuses

Impressed

point taken, well you were running for sure, like a bullet
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:32 am

Grumpy is so post to be a racist comment on villains! Suspect lol, just cause were evil doesn't mean we don't have feelings! Sad but if you like, I had an idea for this comic, if you wish to hear?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 4:55 am

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Grumpy is so post to be a racist comment on villains! Suspect lol, just cause were evil doesn't mean we don't have feelings! Sad but if you like, I had an idea for this comic, if you wish to hear?


sure man, but I meant you guys are gonna be included as villians against xtreme lol, part of the scientists and political force,

so whats your idea?

still need you and razor to tell me your powers and weapon preferences
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:04 am

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Dane Dweller wrote:
Grumpy is so post to be a racist comment on villains! Suspect lol, just cause were evil doesn't mean we don't have feelings! Sad but if you like, I had an idea for this comic, if you wish to hear?


sure man, but I meant you guys are gonna be included as villians against xtreme lol, part of the scientists and political force,

so whats your idea?

still need you and razor to tell me your powers and weapon preferences
Oh, well my idea was a separate thing, like there is a separate Xtreme, but it's corrupted, and it's based on villainy, and wrongness, basically villain only, and they try to conquer the pure Xtreme, but your idea sounds better, any who, if you like I can tell my powers, and what not!
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Powers: Black magic, shadow (being able to fade into the darkness to sneak upon his targets, and enemies)
Bio: (if your up on hearing this) Found wondering the Darklands, and the long, lost son of Six-Six, Dane is your average tyrant of the known universe, he carries out bounties for the demand of anyone with the right price, but his skills of black magic can do much more for his future than a pay day, a future that he can construct in his own image!
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:25 am

kk thnx dane, hope you know this is a futuristic story, like what phantasy Star is.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:29 am

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kk thnx dane, hope you know this is a futuristic story, like what phantasy Star is.
Oh Sci-Fi eh?, well then just add a jetpack to my armor and were good! lol! Lol2
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:31 am

Dane Dweller wrote:
GrumpyTheRam wrote:
kk thnx dane, hope you know this is a futuristic story, like what phantasy Star is.
Oh Sci-Fi eh?, well then just add a jetpack to my armor and were good! lol! Lol2

Seems legit, To Aru Majutsu no index my give you a better idea of what Im going for,
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:33 am

Dane Dweller wrote:
Grumpy is so post to be a racist comment on villains! Suspect lol, just cause were evil doesn't mean we don't have feelings!



Dane is a good guy!!

No surprise there.

@Grumpy

Pff fine. You won't die tomorrow. Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:35 am

@razor

need your powers , bio, and other info to add you by danes side.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:38 am

Xtreme Razor wrote:
Dane Dweller wrote:
Grumpy is so post to be a racist comment on villains! Suspect lol, just cause were evil doesn't mean we don't have feelings!



Dane is a good guy!!

No surprise there.

@Grumpy

Pff fine. You won't die tomorrow. Rolling Eyes
I said we have feelings, anger, sadness, glee, what are you, a robot with no emotion?! Seriously well that wouldn't be a surprise! lol
@Grumps: so you already know what I look like, you know, big spiked boots, black armored pants, large armor torso, with spike details, dark cloak, black jetpack (already attached to back of armored torso!), and my signature black shaded helmet!

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:51 am

I'll do something like Danes'

Name: Xtreme Razor
Age: 16
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Rank: ... 2Xtreme
Powers: Can fly, Jump at amazing heights, My hair can grow up to 10 feet and be really spiky.

OK then the Bio...

Bio: Was found tearing Lord Fuse's clone. After making a truce with humans, Xtreme Razor has vowed to help the humans and rip up the beast that wiped out his planet. The only things he could salvage from that fateful day were two hook-like shaped swords that can pretty much cut through anything.

I can change anything that won't fit. Is this good though?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:52 am

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I said we have feelings, anger, sadness, glee, what are you, a robot with no emotion?!

I thought that was obvious given the colors in my sig and profil pic.
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:54 am

wait your profile pic is gone

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:55 am

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Dane Dweller wrote:

I said we have feelings, anger, sadness, glee, what are you, a robot with no emotion?!

I thought that was obvious given the colors in my sig and profil pic.
Lol, nice! ThumbsUp2 so I Grumps, two epic villains are ready for chaos! FearMe
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:59 am

Dane Dweller wrote:
Xtreme Razor wrote:
Dane Dweller wrote:

I said we have feelings, anger, sadness, glee, what are you, a robot with no emotion?!

I thought that was obvious given the colors in my sig and profil pic.
Lol, nice! ThumbsUp2 so I Grumps, two epic villains are ready for chaos! FearMe


Chapter 4 must be the one Seriously


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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:00 am

I like the story its cool how you use the members here as the charachters. '-'

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:00 am

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:00 am

Cool, me and D, can't wait bro! Rock
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:09 am

Woah woah woah, Im his brother and I wasn't included Misery
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:14 am

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I like the story its cool how you use the members here as the charachters. '-'


Yeh man, still a some members weren't included, and I plan on adding FFmodhq as reenforcements like we're 2 underground societies
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:18 am

Underoground societys? Grumpy logic? '-'

I wanna be in it! xD you can put me in if ya want its your story anyways. '-'

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:28 am

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nova dragon wrote:
I like the story its cool how you use the members here as the charachters. '-'


Yeh man, still a some members weren't included, and I plan on adding FFmodhq as reenforcements like we're 2 underground societies

You mean Angels (Xtreme) v.s. cyborgs (FMHQ)
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 7:11 am

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wait your profile pic is gone

It is?

Dinkleberg stoled it!!!


kEEP CALM AND BLAME DINKLEBUURRRRGGGG

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:25 am

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Underoground societys? Grumpy logic? '-'

I wanna be in it! xD you can put me in if ya want its your story anyways. '-'

gonna need info, powers weapon bio etc man
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:26 am

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MovingXtarget® wrote:
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It is?

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kEEP CALM AND BLAME DINKLEBUURRRRGGGG


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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:29 am

lol chap 4 will be out soon? Question

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:42 am

I wouldn't make FusionMOD Cyborgs. I see Xtreme as a bunch of random friends that decided to join forces for teh lolz.

FusionMOD is more Formal than Xtreme. Also more structured than Xtreme too.



Rajeta uses her powers to summon her alter ego Rex???


...........................


............................fine.

I'll accept this.
I'm not going to nit pick. Besides, this is your story after all.

Your Story, Your interpretation.

Nice chapter!

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:52 am

But I do have one tiny preferred edit.........



Rajeta doesnt own a scythe.

She has a Surge Cannon.
But it's Broken.



So she just uses it as a Bludgeoning weapon.


Why?
Because it's more fun that way.

She recalls it back into her Nano com when she doesnt need it and summons it when she does.
Doing so she can also use the summoning to actually throw it as a Projectile.

A 42 lbs projectile..............and club.


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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:54 am

kk I'll keep that in mind Rock2
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:38 pm

Nice character introductions

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:40 pm

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Nice character introductions

thanks vega xP

included you haki EyeBrows just made it different so it was more original and non over powering lol
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:48 pm

I know thanks love that power and yeah good thing you made it like that it was too OP

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:58 pm

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I know thanks love that power and yeah good thing you made it like that it was too OP

lol yeh man, the main character would have no chance Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 1:42 pm

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There's no Xtreme Razor?

Or even a tool that can erase facial hair???? (No.)

Fine! Have fun with your crazy technology and your wonderful fan-art and stories that makes it worth reading and..The God...

I don't need any o you!!


You forgot you and dane are eevviillll so youre not at Xtremes hide out lol, same with brad but he was in chapter 2, cut my arm.
Grumps wheres the angeletic demon?Though even if I'm not in its still good!

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 1:44 pm

Kyle Saturday wrote:
GrumpyTheRam wrote:
Xtreme Razor wrote:
There's no Xtreme Razor?

Or even a tool that can erase facial hair???? (No.)

Fine! Have fun with your crazy technology and your wonderful fan-art and stories that makes it worth reading and..The God...

I don't need any o you!!


You forgot you and dane are eevviillll so youre not at Xtremes hide out lol, same with brad but he was in chapter 2, cut my arm.
Grumps wheres the angeletic demon?Though even if I'm not in its still good!

lol since you were evil in the movie I figured Id put you inside the evil section, having a villain role later on and thanks man Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 1:50 pm

Woah woah.......................EVIL?!Ugh....I thought I changed and wanted to help officer but Like Undelos said its your story after all!

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:00 pm

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Woah woah.......................EVIL?!Ugh....I thought I changed and wanted to help officer but Like Undelos said its your story after all!

lol wellll that could happen later on, I didnt know your whole story bro Razz mind telling me what power youd have and a bio, like the others?
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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:18 pm

Oh sorry...
Kyle Verteno: Ability,TO feel the waves of peoples mind and tell what they are thinking or what they were thinking.

Main weapon:To control all elements and max their power to the fullest.(If he gets to mad and out of control he forgets everthing and combines all elements to unleash the most powerful attack then forgets everything he did.)

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:21 pm

Kyle Saturday wrote:
Oh sorry...
Kyle Verteno: Ability,TO feel the waves of peoples mind and tell what they are thinking or what they were thinking.

Main weapon:To control all elements and max their power to the fullest.(If he gets to mad and out of control he forgets everthing and combines all elements to unleash the most powerful attack then forgets everything he did.)

Bio:Kyle was a late member of Xtreme,only coming because he heard of the advancements of the technology compared to his village with didn't like the tech.He realized they could help him with controlling his powers and then started to learn what was happening and became a very powerful element master(only uses his power in emergencies) and with his knowledge of enemies weakness,became a squad leader of Team A
nice bio kyle y u forget why u did LET DOCTER ED FIX YUUU ED Head Bang Ed Hungry Ed Run ED Head Bang

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:23 pm

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Kyle Saturday wrote:
Oh sorry...
Kyle Verteno: Ability,TO feel the waves of peoples mind and tell what they are thinking or what they were thinking.

Main weapon:To control all elements and max their power to the fullest.(If he gets to mad and out of control he forgets everthing and combines all elements to unleash the most powerful attack then forgets everything he did.)

Bio:Kyle was a late member of Xtreme,only coming because he heard of the advancements of the technology compared to his village with didn't like the tech.He realized they could help him with controlling his powers and then started to learn what was happening and became a very powerful element master(only uses his power in emergencies) and with his knowledge of enemies weakness,became a squad leader of Team A
nice bio kyle y u forget why u did LET DOCTER ED FIX YUUU ED Head Bang Ed Hungry Ed Run ED Head Bang
Sorry but wut? Question

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PostSubject: Re: Time Of Day Chapter 03 (Critical X/ Xtremists Hide out and Members)   Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:26 pm

Lol whoh that was messed up what i ment was why u forget things after you go into a rage...docotr ed can fix you ED Head Bang Ed Hungry Ed Run ED Head Bang Troll Face

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