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 The Cyber Feeling Chapter 1

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PostSubject: The Cyber Feeling Chapter 1   Mon Jan 14, 2013 3:54 am

The Cyber Feeling
An 18 year old man walks in a town. "Why isnt there anyone here,its like the whole town is empty" said the man. After walking for a while he finds a man at the park."Hey sir, Why isnt there anyone in this town" said the man. "Its because their all hiding in their homes" said the streinger. "Hiding from what" the man asked. "From that thing over there "said the streinger pointing to the left. There was a robot that quikly ran to the man and the streinger, then knocked out the man while the streinger smiled. The man was unconscios for a week.
He wakes up in an unusual place.
"your finaly awake" said a very high pitch voice. "What the? who the hell are you?" said the man.
"Im the kid who sent an agent to rescue you, so you better watch your tone" said the child. "what but your a baby what are you even talking about" said the man all freaked out like. "listen, you were taken prisiner by an evil man who experamets on living beings, and we saved you before he can turn you into a full robot" said the child.
"Did that realy happen?" asked the man. "Just look at your arms and legs"said the child.
the man saw that his arms and feet were cybernrtic.
"the good news about this is you now have powers, but the bad news is that you cant feel anything from your hands or feet" said the child.
"What? why didnt you get me out of there before?!" said the man furyusly.
"We didnt know about it until it was too late" said the child.
"this is horrible" said the man sadly.
"Where are my maners i almost forgot to introduce myself" said the child. "My name is Ben Richazu, im 4 years old and i am one of the most intelegent minds in the headquarters, whats your name?" asks the child.
"My name is Erikku Deibisu, im 18 years old and live alone in an empty apartment" said the man.
"you dont have to line poor and alone, you could live in the colony as an agent, what do you say?" asks Ben.
"i dont know, can i have time to think about it?" asks Erikku.
"you can go outside and test your new abilities if you want" said Ben.
Erikku leaves and finds the same robot from before. The robot trys to punch him but Erikku finds out that he has quik reflexes and blocks it. He finds out an ability that he has and shot a beam out of his hand riping out the robots arm. he focuses and shoots a powerful beam out of his hand completely whyping away the robot.
"Nice shot" said a random lady.
"Who are you" said Erikku.
"My name is Julia, im an agent of the colony, its a place for anyone and its rent free, its the best place in the world" said the lady. "Well i hope il see you later" said julia.
Erikku goes back to see Ben.
"So did you think about it?" asks Ben.
"Ill join the colony as an agent".
"ok then your code name for anywere other then the colony will by .....Saiba burasuto" said Ben.
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PostSubject: Re: The Cyber Feeling Chapter 1   Mon Jan 14, 2013 3:57 am

Yup he made these 2 chapters last night so I went to sleep earlier then I would,
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PostSubject: Re: The Cyber Feeling Chapter 1   Mon Jan 14, 2013 5:14 am

good chap.You should consider using xtreme charecters make the story more lively

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PostSubject: Re: The Cyber Feeling Chapter 1   Mon Jan 14, 2013 5:28 am

°«©XxTrÏçK§Hø†z®»™ wrote:
good chap.You should consider using xtreme charecters make the story more lively

lolz robot person Sure Lol
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