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 Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)

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PostSubject: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:20 am



(So,this is an origin story of my OC,just started writing today,so cut me some slack on this one. BY THE WAY. THIS IS STARTING IN THE FUTURE GOING INTO THE PAST,I REPEAT:FUTURE INTO PAST TIMELINE HERE.) Pistol yawns as he watches the cars go by around Central Station. "Ugh,they chose the wrong day to be late,the one time I actually HAVE a chance to get sponsered by DexLabs....just my luck.." He held his hoverboard by his fingertips and flipped it around in his hand. "OI,PISTOL YOU DOLT! GET UP 'ERE." He knew that voice. The only one besides Pistol that had a homemade Hoverboard....Tyxon. "HEY TYXON,YOU KEEP SPITTING LIKE THAT,YOUR GONNA MAKE IT RAIN.." Pistol yelled back up. They were rivals after all,they grew up together since Pistol lost his parents to a "strange expirment" all those years back. But along with Tyxon,Lilia,Kaga and Aiko,they make up the best HoverTeam this side of the Mount Blackhead. After meeting up with his team,they headed over to DexLabs. Pistol's heart was beating fast. They walked through the entrance and were greeted by Computress,Dexter's robotic Assitaint. "Team OmniBlast,I presume?" She said while they all took a seat. "No,We're the bloody DELIGHTFUL KIDS FROM ACROSS THE LANE." Txyon grumbled. "T-txyon! Be nice!" Lilia punched him in the arm "Really sorry ma'am! He's feeling a little sick!" She grins evily "And he should really cover his mouth,so he doesn't spread his germs!" Pistol laughed "So,we heard you were looking for me and my team,you guys should really stop trying to by my blueprints...I'm not selling..sorry." She pulled up a holographic map of the entire City. "No,this is about finding Racers for the next HovPri. I have been asked to pool from the newest,freshest faces of the sport." Everyone was smiling and high fiving excidetly. This was gonna be the big break for OmniBlast! "Which of you would like to be first to take the Recruitment Simulator?" Aiko raised her hand before anyone else had a chance: "ME! I WANNA! LEMME GO!!" She jumped up and down "ME ME ME ME ME MEEEE!!" Pistol sighed. "That's Aiko for you..good luck,we'll wait for the results outside." Everyone moved to the board that displayed the Course and Time they all had to aim for. "This'll be a breeze." Tyxon hummed. "The path of strength cannot be judged by pride" Another proverb from Kaga,well...the guy did spend 8 years training with Lance. He had the most patince and was obviously the strongest of the group,with or without pride. Pistol stared outside....it had started to rain....but it was green..."Nah..it has to be the window..." He thought. Then,the "rain" got thicker and thicker....He ran outside..what was this stuff?! He open his mouth to call his friends "GUYS, YOU GOTTA CO-" The rain had gotten into his mouth....but it wasn't rain at all..he fell to the ground,coughing. Could this be another Baddie attack? Since when did they use Biotechnical Weapons?!? As he finally rose to his feet spitting out the rest of the Fusion,he was met by a terrifing sight,himself. The Fusion Pistol let out a quick smile as he streched out his arm,pinning Pistol to the wall. "GAGH!!" He was losing conciousness,this...thing was gonna kill him....

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:24 am

what's OC? Orginal Character?

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:25 am

dannybosa wrote:
what's OC? Orginal Character?

Da.

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:31 am

Pictures aren't showing, Pistol.

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:33 am

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Pictures aren't showing, Pistol.

Didn't know that. But it was only the cover. So.. yaeh. o3o

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:36 am

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Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:
Pictures aren't showing, Pistol.

Didn't know that. But it was only the cover. So.. yaeh. o3o

Well, cool story anyway.


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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:49 am

Great job.Cool story cheers

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 10:31 am

°«©РwŃź0Ŕ®»™ wrote:
Great job.Cool story cheers

Any feedback?

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 10:33 am

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°«©РwŃź0Ŕ®»™ wrote:
Great job.Cool story cheers

Any feedback?



You can take that as a "yes".

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 10:51 am

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 10:52 am

no quoting large posts and images, beat ya to it oliver lol!

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 11:00 am

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no quoting large posts and images, beat ya to it oliver lol!



@Pistol: You seriously don't know the name of the alien I posted, do you...? Here's a hint: It starts with an F.

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 11:08 am

Oliver you magician Shocked

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PostSubject: Re: Pistol's Origin (Part one,REALLY long read..)   Fri Mar 29, 2013 11:36 am

Fuse will be in the next part. It's an intro.

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