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Angel Archer
FusionFall Name : angel archer
Level : 36
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Join date : 2012-08-26
Age : 28
FF Location : grinding the darklands ..'-'..!!!
 |  Subject: our short story, of a long run. Fri Jul 26, 2013 7:30 am | |
| this is a short story, for your interpretation...
We now stand idle, if idle at all.... many having fell, fallen, dropped flat from the face of this dry erase data
that has been placed here for sometime, we kill time and time has killed us, we aim high, but cross heirs always come back to us, we are the fallen of the fusion and we made a silent commotion,
vallhallen beside us pointing his pink axe to that jealous green sky, we have been pointing our fingers to this God forsaken sky....
far too long we sought out a way out, or even a coming age, we waited patiently inline, online, most the time, we wait.... no news of a coming hope... another day our small world is still a dead world, been past by, been fast typed, or hacked down... our hopes for a coming.. have been wiped clean like the smile of children in a brutal environment..
our mutual accomplishments will accompany me for a long long while... literal hope like literature thrown into the wind for its carry off ... might be a little better off, green green world we seen for far too long... we stayed here.. countless times and countless amounts have been spent here...
perhaps alot more humanity does grip to faith then i would have given credit...
i can see... hands turning pale... cause letting go was just too easy... or was hope a little too good to be true... always too hold on... much better... maybe my hands will get much redder if i hold on tighter to hope so brainless...
must not refrain from, one day we will gain from our buried hopes, retired hopes... no hopes go down in vain...
calmly calm down... and let now be now... and the future be the future... we cant change the past... cause there's no blueprint left by number two, i guess all thats left is remains of funny and how strange....
what joy this had brought us in the past... truth be told we will never speak of these joyous memories outside these forums or our minds. let now be now and let then die then, so we can move now from here to there. |
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Rioxnation
FusionFall Name : L4D_Snarlingbeastess
Level : 36
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Join date : 2013-07-26
| | Subject: Re: our short story, of a long run. Fri Jul 26, 2013 7:57 am | |
| I like it  sounds like poetry and the similies paint your words like a picture in my mind. If your planing on inquiring further I encourage you to |
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Dr.Snake
Dr.Snake
FusionFall Name : The Dr.Snake
Level : 36
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Join date : 2013-07-03
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| | Subject: Re: our short story, of a long run. Fri Jul 26, 2013 10:08 am | |
| Sounds good. Very emotional. |
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Angel Archer
FusionFall Name : angel archer
Level : 36
Posts : 148
Join date : 2012-08-26
Age : 28
FF Location : grinding the darklands ..'-'..!!!
| | Subject: Re: our short story, of a long run. Mon Jul 29, 2013 6:11 am | |
| - Rioxnation wrote:
- I like it sounds like poetry and the similies paint your words like a picture in my mind. If your planing on inquiring further I encourage you to
thanks guys, >.< yeah i kinda had a image of words when writing this i guess, and maybe ill write more .-. not much to write about on ole fufa though '-' and i usually conjure up poetry usually its always really dark or truthful, hence all DaH EMOtions up in there. |
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