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PostSubject: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 4:46 am

Fusionfall Crisis Core

Chapter 1: It’s real
 
“Finally! That plane was getting stuffy” a boy said

The boy was wearing black jeans and a gray shirt that said “New York” he had low fade black hair and stunning brown eyes

“Stop complaining this is your first plane ride Samuel” an older girl said

“Yea yea whatever Faith let’s get the bags and go to the hotel I wanna login to Xtreme”

Faith was wearing a pink shirt she had long black hair and blue jeans

“Seriously Samuel? That nerdy fansite you always login to, how many times do I have to spell it out FUSIONFALL IS DEAD”

“I GASP AT YOU no sister of mine will be dissing Fusionfall!”

“Faith leave him alone” another boy said

The boy was wearing a blue shirt with dark blue jeans and he and low fade hair just like his brother

“Joshua, Samuel needs a reality check Fusionfall isn’t real”

“I don’t care what you say I know Fusionfall is gonna revive” Samuel said crossing his arms

“Will you guys cut it out!” their parents said in unison   

“Faith started it”

“I don’t care who started it you better stop!” Their mom screamed

“Yes mom” Faith and Samuel said

So the family of 5 got out the plane rented a car and drove to the hotel

“Ah the hot air of the sunshine state is so soothing compared to the cold air back in Maryland” Samuel said getting out the car

“Tell me about it I like this weather but I hope I don’t sweat too much” Faith said patting her hair

So as the family was walking inside the hotel Samuel noticed something very unusual he saw a squirrel on top of a tree but it was… green

“Are their supposed to be green squirrels in Florida?”

“Hm? Where?”

But when Faith looked up she saw no squirrels at all

“Stop lying Samuel”

“I wasn’t!”

“Riiight”

Faith, Joshua and their parents went inside the hotel but left Samuel behind

“I know I saw a green squirrel”

Then as Samuel looked closely at the hole in tree he saw a pair of red eyes staring at him, he rubbed his eyes thinking that
 he was imagining it but he still saw the red eyes 

“Something is odd about this place” Samuel said walking inside but still staring at the squirrel

So after Samuel caught up with his family they unpacked and settled in the hotel

“Hey I’m gonna go to the computer room okay?”

“K just be back for dinner mom is making rice”

So Samuel took the card key and walked all the way to the computer room, he slid the card key in and walked inside the room. The room consisted of two computers and a few shelves of office supplies

“You know I’m gonna listen to some music but I forgot my headphones in the room well better go get them”

So as Samuel was walking to the room there was that squirrel again but this time there was two

“What do you guys want from me? I have some acorns want some?”

“We want you dead” the first squirrel said

Samuel slapped himself ten times then looked out the window but the squirrels vanished


“Sheepsus Cripes did I just hear that!? Ugh I think I am playing too much video games”

So Samuel went in the room got his headphones and returned to the computer room but when he returned there was a girl about 14 years of age with orange hair and red clothing on the other computer

“Hi” the girl said

“O hey” Samuel replied

Samuel sitting down turned on the computer and clicked his email he had 10 unread messages but jumped up and caught his eye its said “Read this its important” So out of curiosity Samuel clicked the message it had a few words and a picture for him to download

“Well it says it’s important”  

The message said “Samuel, Their coming for you”

“Who’s coming for me?”

Samuel clicked the downloaded image and to his surprise it showed a picture… of a Cerberus


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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 4:48 am

Yea i'm just gonna assume how you guys look like in real life i am also gonna assume where you guys live since this is based of the real word

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:00 am

oooooh!! this is gonna be exciting! Very Happy i liiiike it!

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:06 am

Its about time someone replied sheesh    Jelous

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:11 am

lol sorry xD I just got out of school haha Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:13 am

hey did u see grumpz's story yet?

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:17 am

:O noooo is it on here?

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:20 am

check soul of matter it should be on the scrolling topics

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:21 am

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:O noooo is it on here?
Yep. Not only does he draw only his own characters, you and Zoe, he includes only them (and you) in his stories. Jelous I know, he only just uploaded part 1, but still.

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:28 am

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:
Gloryangel wrote:
:O noooo is it on here?
Yep. Not only does he draw only his own characters, you and Zoe, he includes only them (and you) in his stories. Jelous I know, he only just uploaded part 1, but still.
:O It was so awesome

'specially cuz i was in it


I'm famous :O hahahaha

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:33 am

every xtremer i can remember actually might be in this... except...her

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:55 am

Chapter 2: The Chase

“A CEBER-!” Samuel yelled but held in because of the girl beside him

“Excuse me?”  The girl said

“Oh uh I won a sweepstakes foooor Ceberalton” Samuel said closing down the picture of the Cerberus

“Oh congrats”

“Thank you”

“I am very surprised” The girl said

“About what?” Samuel asked

“That the green squirrel didn’t freak you out”

“!!! What green squirrel?”

“Don’t play dumb the one I sent to track you”

“Track me? Great so I’m guessing by the long orange hair and the obsession with red you’re Fusion Blossom”

“Bingo”

Her eyes were turning red her skin changing a pale-ish color to an emerald green

“Wow so Fusionfall is real”

“More real than you know”

“So this is the part where you try to kill me?”

“Kill you? Oh no you have mistaken my objectives” she said getting out of her chair

“Wait what?”

“You know that story on Xtreme about you and your brother’s characters?”

“Yea ‘Ace and Jace bro’s with a lot of foes’ why?”

“I’m the good Fusion Blossom from your book”

“Say wha?”

“Yea it’s hard to believe but it’s true”

“Well I don’t have trouble believing, wait you said squirrel as in singular”

“Yea I did why?”

“Two squirrels came to me and said they wanted me dead”

“We need to move now!” Fusion Blossom said grabbing Samuel’s hand

“Aaaargh” Samuel screamed pulling his hand
 
“Sorry sorry fusion matter hands let me revert back to human form” 

Fusion Blossom reverted back to her human form but she appeared older about 18 years of age

“Yea that would be nice” Samuel said sarcastically

“I have a car parked out front lets go”


“A car? But you’re a-“

“Fusion, so” Fusion Blossom interrupted

“Let’s just go”

Fusion Blossom and Samuel ran to her car got inside

“Wait what am I gonna tell my parents?”

“I don’t know make up some-“

The ground shook violently it was like something was coming something… big. A loud bark shattered all the windows in the area


“Where is that coming from?” Samuel said picking a piece of glass out of his leg

Fusion Blossom pointed to the left of the car

“Aw heck no, STEP ON IT!”    

“You won’t escape from me traitor!” The Cerberus exclaimed

The Cerberus was chasing the car at full speed knocking away any and everything that got in its path

“I don’t think we are going to outrun this guy!” Samuel said holding his seat

“I’m not trying to escape it I just too fulfill my mission”

“Which is?”

The car was coming close to an unfinished highway

“Getting you to safety”

The car jumped the bridge and so did the Cerberus. Fusion Blossom pressed a button under Samuel’s seat

“What did you do!?”

“I’m getting you out of here”

“What about you?”

Fusion Blossom didn’t answer

But before Samuel could ask again he was covered in a light and was beaming away particle by particle. A portal opened in the sky where Samuel’s particles were disappearing to, before his eyes finished beaming he saw the Cerberus shooting a laser from his mouth and completely annihilated the car with no sign of survivors

“NO!” Samuel said before the portal finished closing

The portal opened on the other side and Samuel dropped straight through

“Ow” Samuel said getting up off the floor “Where am I”

Where Samuel landed was like a laboratory but it had rooms and everything a kitchen a living room everything it was more of a house teched up. As Samuel was walking around he saw a room “Meeting Room” it said on the door so he approached it and it opened by itself, when he walked inside he saw three people talking in front of a hologram map

“Hello?” Samuel whispered a bit

The three people turned around. The first person was a male who had brunette colored hair a black leather jacket and black jeans. The second person was also a male who had glasses and short black hair wearing a white T-shirt and white short pants. The third was a female this time wearing a black shirt and jeans that had a Fusion spawn on it and she had purple hair


“Hello blad nice of you to make it” the guy with the leather jacket said


“!!! Blad!? Wait- Hom?”

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 8:02 am

gonna post chapter three and four either tonight or tomorrow

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 8:15 am

ooh okay Very Happy  Exciting! i like this ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 9:19 am

"Stunning brown eyes"

..............wat? Seriously 

Hmmmm. Not a bad story. Sorry it took me so long to read it. Work is lame like that. I'll do what I can to keep up with the story.
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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 9:28 am

Sheepsus cripes Crying or Very sad 

Sheepsus, my word, it became popurar lol! 

cant wait to read more.
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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Oct 05, 2013 9:58 am

@Undelos heh sry got to over emphasize on that

@Grumpz and Glory Glad u guys like it im woking on three now

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sun Oct 06, 2013 2:43 pm

Chapter 3: Xtremers Assemble!
 
“Whoa whoa Hom!?” 

“Ya blad who else could it be?”

“First green squirrels now this” Samuel said facepalming

“Had a rough day?” The guy with glasses said

“Rough day? You don’t know how weird my day was Oliver”

“Whaaat how did you know it was me?”

Samuel, Hom and the girl looked at Oliver

“What?”

“Dude really?”

“Seriously what set me apart?”

“Anyway I’m assuming your Undelos”

The girl voiced a shot clock buzzer

“Mei?”

The girl voiced the shot clock buzzer again

“Glory?”

The girl voiced the shot clock buzzer again

“Oh no there is only one person you could be” Samuel said with a gulp

“That’s right”

“Subject B!!!” Samuel said pointing at her

“Ding ning ning ning ning!!!”  Bella voiced waving her finger

“Oh my goodness!! Where’s X!?”

“Don’t worry for once I’m not gonna be obsessed with him… at the moment . And call me Melissa”

“Melissa that’s your real name?”

“Yep yep”

“What about you Hom? Wait let me guess Chives, Walter, Alfred?”

“Josh” Hom said crossing his arms

Samuel smirks

“Josh really? Eh not what expected but eh. So what about you Oli?”

This time it was Oliver, Bella and Hom staring at Samuel

“Your real name is Oliver isn’t it?”

“Ding ning ning ning ning” Oliver mimicking Bella

“Yeah I believe you said that on Xtreme before”

“Yes I did. So what's your real name?”

“Samuel”

“Samuel? Stop joking blad”

Samuel looked at Hom with a rude stare

“Got a problem with it… Blad?”

“You you you stop that!”

“Guys stop fighting we have more pressing matters to attend to” A guy said walking through the door

The four turned around and saw a guy with white hair blue eyes and equally white hoodie and black jeans

“By the all spark it can’t be”

“Hello Ace I’m-“

“X!?” Samuel interrupted

“X-ekins!!” Bella shouted

“Bella!!” The other four shouted

“Fine” Bella said crossing her arms and turning away  

“Well I’m guessing that you’re surprised I have white hair in real life” X said turning to Samuel

“Yes yes I am”

“So were the rest of them”

“Did you elevate to Super Sayian 5 bro?”

“Haha” X laughed while walking to the hologram table

“So it’s time huh?” Bella said walking with the others to the table

  “Yea it is. The reason why the Xtremers have been summoned is because we found out Fuse was real”

Samuel turned his head at X

“All of you were brought here by Rebel Fusions and sadly they didn’t make. So I’m gonna get straight and to the point. All Xtremers are being hunted by Fuse so we need to bring them here the Fallasphere where Fuse can’t come, then we need to equip everyone with these.

X pulls out a box of watches

“Sweet were Power Rangers!” Samuel said grabbing one

“Not exactly Ace even better these watches lets us turn into our Fusionfall selves”

Everyone in the room including X gave a little smirk while looking at each other

“With these we will be able to use Fuse’s only weakness, ourselves. We have nano stations built in then we have then unlimited inventory and in watch purchasing for item and equipment”

“So bro how do we turn into our Fusionfall selves?” Hom asked

“Since I didn’t want a big phrase I kept it simple say your character’s name and done”

“K easy enough but there is another reason why the certain amount of us is here”

“Your right Ace, not all the Xtremers were being attacked so we need to get them to safety so I’m sending you guys”

“Sweet” Bella said

“Awesome” Hom said

“Wooooo!” Samuel said

“Yes!” Oliver said

“So go to the teleporting room and I will send you guys there”

So the four ran to the teleporting room (The door that X came out of) and went into a tube

“Ok guys we will make connections  through our watches once you make contact press the left 
button on the side of your watches ok”

“Wait how do we know who are we going to get?” Samuel asked

“It will appear on your watches when you land”

“Ok”

“Any other questions?”

The crew shook their heads

“Ok teleporting in T minus 5…4….3….2….1… Go!”

Light immersed the crew and they were immediately transported to their next location

“Ouch” Samuel said landing on a sidewalk “Did I ever mention I hate teleportation?”
So Samuel got up and looked at his watch


“So who am I getting?”

Searching…. Searching”  his watched buzzed “Xtremer found… find Mister Darklingomega a.k.a
 Undead Brad”



“Sweet I’m gonna find my bro”

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Mon Oct 07, 2013 8:11 am

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Tue Oct 08, 2013 3:35 am

Chapter 4: The Malfunction

So Samuel was walking around town not knowing where he was

“So is there like a Brad GPS on this thing?”

 A man with a gray suit walked past Samuel so he decided to ask him questions

“Excuse me sir” Samuel said

“Huh o yes can I help you?”  The man replied

“Which state am I in?”

“Uh am I being punk’d?”

“No I just wanna know what state I am in”

“Virginia”

“Thank you sir”

So Samuel continued to wander and the man still puzzled by the question walked away also

“So if I was Brad where would I be?”

As Samuel was walking he saw a guy with a baseball cap, blue jeans and a jersey that said “Bradley 15” on the back

“Wait could it be?”

Samuel and the guy walked past each other locking eyes as they walked through 

“I feel like I know that kid” The guy said

“Ok I am 99% sure that was Brad, but I know how I can prove it”

Samuel snuck up behind the guy

“Mister Darklingomega is that you?”

The boy instantly turned around 

“Ace!!!”  Brad screamed

“Buddy!!!” Samuel screamed

“I knew it was you! But we have no time to celebrate” Brad said with a concerned voice 
 
“So I’m guessing you know then?”

“Yea right behind me to the left is a good Fusion Buttercup”

Samuel looked and saw a girl with black hair and and green rocker clothes and spiked boots

“But the three people beside her are three Tech wings in disguise and they are not good”

“I see”

“She informed me that fusionfall and xtreme is real”

“That’s good so that saves me the explaining , if we all three of us to survive we need to get to a place where no one can see us and teleport out of here” 

“Yea I know but there is one itsy bitsy problem”

“What’s that?”

“See those five people that just came up behind her?”

“Yea”

“Those are all fusions” 


“!!!”

“Yea I know. For some odd reason I can see fusions even in their human forms”

“That’s a good thing that will really help in the future, but we won’t have a future if they get any closer”

“We can go to my house I will just say you guys are friends from school and teleport from my room”

“That’s good but um how is she going to get closer?”

“Start walking you’ll see”

So Samuel and Brad started walking to Brad’s house, they were walking through a park. Fusion Buttercup still accompanied by the fusions and fusion monsters tripped intentionally into a bush, once the fusions and monsters passed her she resumed her normal fusion form and flew at supersonic speeds into the sky

“O so that’s what you meant”

“Now that she’s gone… RUN!”

Samuel and Brad picked up the pace and so did their pursuers they ran, jumped and slid through most of town

“Look there’s my house!”

“But they are gaining very fast!” Samuel exclaimed

“Good Buttercup already made it to my house”

“I will hold them trust me”

“U mad bro!? they will rip you to shreds”

“I got this”

Samuel clicked his watch

“Ace Cometshark!” Samuel screamed

 
But nothing happened

“Ace Cometshark! Ace Cometshark” Samuel continued to scream while tapping the button multiple times

“Their getting closer!” Brad exclaimed  

“Wow this kid do I always have to cover for him?” one of the fusions said

The other fusions turned to see Fusion Blossom

“Surprise surprise” Fusion Blossom said punching the enemies to the sky

“Stupid thing work!” Samuel exclaimed… still pressing the button

“Forget it let’s go!” 

Fusion Blossom grabbed Samuel and Brad and started flying to her sister

“Hey Blossom what's up”

“Really no ‘you’re alive I am so happy to see you’?”

“You’re alive” Samuel said sarcastically

“Whatever come on”

So Fusion Blossom flew to her sister with the boys still in her grip

“Press the button!”

“You better work this time!”

Samuel pressed the button and immediately they were teleported to the Meeting Room

“Oh now you decide to work!”

“Oh you guys made it! Hey Fusion Blossom and Buttercup!”  X said

So Samuel, Brad and the fusion sisters got up off the floor to see not only X and the others but three new other people with them . there was all three females. The first one had blonde hair a blue shirt and light blue jeans and looked very excited. The second had long brown hair and black jeans and an equally black shirt. The Third had black hair white shirt with a blue skirt

“Hey Ace it’s good to see you!”  the blonde girl said

“Wait I know who you are, give me a second”

“Cuss yea you know who I am”

“Sigh that you Glory”

“YESSSS how did you know?”

“… lucky guess”

“You already know who I am” the girl in the skirt said

“Mei?”

“Yep”

“And I doubt you know who I am” the third girl said

“I think I know. Oh who’s Roy again?”

“My delightfully delicious excuse for setting my enemies, wildlife and stage environments on fire”

“Undelos you pyrmomaniac “

“What you said you liked it too”

“I know”

“Ok guys enough with the introductions, we more important matter to discuss”

“And that would be..?” Undelos asked


“Sinister X” 






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PostSubject: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapters 1-5)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 2:12 am

Chapter 5: All for one

“Did you just say Sinister X?” Oliver asked

“Yea and it’s not good apparently he went missing” X replied

“I thought you said it’s not good?” Samuel said

“It’s not, he is the only that can explain what's going on here, and the malfunction with your watch”

“Oh you’re right”

“Well the simple thing to do blad is to send out a team to look for him and send out others to find more xtremers” Hom implied

“I am, the list of xtremers we have are Hom, Bella, Oliver, Ace, Glory, Mei, Undelos and Brad plus myself. So Undelos, Oliver, Hom, Bella and I will investigate any leads we have on Sinister’s disappearance, the rest of you head to the table and find out where the next Xtremers are something tells me this is gonna be trouble.

So the first team went to the teleportation room and teleported to some place across the world

“Aw we’re getting treated like lackeys” Glory exclaimed

“No we’re not, finding the other Xtremers is very vital and is equally important” Samuel said

“Ace’s right Glory if we stay here too long we could be losing Xtremers right now!” Brad added

“Now that you put it that way let’s get moving!”

So the other Xtremers rushed to the hologram table to search for more of their members

“I got Marcie!” Glory said

“I got Dane!” Brad said

“Sweet I will go get Zeroknight” Mei said

“And looks like I got Little Miss Bioshine” Ace said

“Me and Fusion Buttercup will stay to maintain communication between you guys and you’re gonna need someone at the teleporter controls”

“And you guys will need these especially you Ace just in case your watch malfunctions again” Buttercup said while giving each of them a spare watch

“Thanks! O and question Blossom how did you survive the blast with the Cerberus?”

“You know fusions don’t die we either turn into nanos or we level and come back stronger, you honestly think that in ALL those missions you do it’s not the same fusion?

“Oh that explains a lot” Glory said “Well of we go!”

So Glory, Brad, Ace and Mei hurried to the teleporter room and immediately were teleported to their next locations

“Hey I landed on my two feet this time” Ace said “Ugh this heat again I must be in Florida must be Tampa Bay guessing by the stadium”

So like finding Brad, Ace continued to walk around to he found a clue to where he might find Zoe

“Hope this is gonna be easy as Brad”

A huge explosion shook the ground causing fissures and earthquakes

“Guess it is gonna be that easy”

“Hey Ace!”  someone screamed

“Huh Mei what are you doing here?”

“Looks like Zeroknight is in Florida as well”

“Well that’s good I’m gonna need all the help I can get”

“Yea. We will never make it on foot but guess who can fly?”

“Do it” 

“Selena Aerosteel!”

Upon those words and the shining light of her watch Mei transformed into a fusionfall warrior with a pink and white skirt pink glasses and a fosters blade

“Gimme your hand!”

So Mei and Ace flew to the loud explosion

“Mei get closer to the ground and drop me I’m gonna search on foot you stay airborne so you can get a better view”

“Ok good luck”

So after Samuel was dropped he continued his search on foot. With the chaos and confusion of crowd it was very hard to search but eventually Samuel saw a girl and a boy being chased by 10 huge Junkasaurus Rexes. The girl had blonde hair a blue short sleeve and white pants. The boy had a black shirt with white words on the front that said “GTA V” and he had blue jeans with brown hair.

“Sheepsus Cripes that must be torture” Ace said in awe


One of the Junkasaurus rexes saw Ace and stood there for a moment

“Oh boy I’ve been spotted”

The Junkasaurus roared and started chasing Samuel

“Great first a Cerberus now this”

While Samuel was running he stopped for a moment and the Junkasaurus Rex ran passed him, Samuel grabbed his tail and started road skiing

“Woooooo this is awesome! Wait what am I doing? Ace focus!”

Samuel hit a vital spot in Junkasaurus’ tail and immediately the Junkasaurus reacted and flipped Samuel to its head
“Now you go my way”
Samuel went into the Junkasaurus’ head and found a steering wheel
“I wonder”
Samuel pressed the pedal and turned the wheel and Junkasaurus reacted instantly and it dashed through the others like it was nothing

“Mei do you read? Mei?” Samuel said talking in his watch

“Yea I read you Ace I have a visual”

“Good. Alrighty this may sound dumb but throw me Knight’s watch”

“It doesn’t sound dumb actually I can’t make it anyway”

“Why?”

“Tech wings are on my tail."

Samuel looked up to see a massive amount of tech wings following Mei and gaining on her

 “Alright here it goes”

Mei threw Zero’s watch to Ace and almost dropping it caught it

“Phew I thought I was going to lose it for sure” Samuel said with a sigh “ZOE, ZERO CATCH!”

“Huh is that Ace?” Zoe said

“I think so” Zeroknight replied

Zoe and Zeroknight caught the watches and put it on their arms

“Whaddya do with it?” Zoe yelled

“Say your characters names!”

“Well let’s give it a shot” Zeroknight asked

“Yea lets”

“Zakrokx Prodigy!”

“Zoe Bioshine!”  

Zakrokx Prodigy yea I don’t know how he looks like SoHappy 

Zoe Bioshine turned her hair from blonde to brown she had the Guardian Set and Devil temptation wings (goes against everything I stand for) 

“Oh my goodness I’m Zoe this is soooo awesome!”

“Prodigy my man!” 

“Yea I know it’s exciting you guys mind!”

“Ready Zoe?” Prodigy said

“Ready!”

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 3:47 am

Troll Face . . . . Blue Eyes.

Seems like the secret is still safe.


That's interesting that you bring in Sinister X. I never thought about him being an actual story element.

I see that Fusion Blossom and Fusion Buttercup are becoming strong characters for the story. Did you plan on giving them their own name?
That way you, as well as the characters dont have to refer to them by that long title.

Not only that, If your story is good enough, you'll be putting character development into them and they will evolve into their own being; separate from their regular counterparts as far as personality.


I do like the flow of the story. Its simple, but entertaining.
I also like how it gets to the point..........but maybe it does so too much.


Take for instance the part where you met Bradley for the first time:


"So Samuel continued to wander and the man still puzzled by the question walked away also

“So if I was Brad where would I be?”

As Samuel was walking he saw a guy with a baseball cap, blue jeans and a jersey that said “Bradley 15” on the back

“Wait could it be?”

Samuel and the guy walked past each other locking eyes as they walked through

“I feel like I know that kid” The guy said

“Ok I am 99% sure that was Brad, but I know how I can prove it”

Samuel snuck up behind the guy

“Mister Darklingomega is that you?”

The boy instantly turned around

“Ace!!!”  Brad screamed

“Buddy!!!” Samuel screamed

“I knew it was you! But we have no time to celebrate” Brad said with a concerned voice

“So I’m guessing you know then?”

“Yea right behind me to the left is a good Fusion Buttercup”

Samuel looked and saw a girl with black hair and and green rocker clothes and spiked boots

“But the three people beside her are three Tech wings in disguise and they are not good”

“I see”

“She informed me that fusionfall and xtreme is real”

“That’s good so that saves me the explaining , if we all three of us to survive we need to get to a place where no one can see us and teleport out of here”

“Yea I know but there is one itsy bitsy problem”

“What’s that?”

“See those five people that just came up behind her?”

“Yea”

“Those are all fusions”



Again, I like how you do keep it simple............but at times, it does help to add more detail that way you can paint a picture with just your words.


As Samuel was walking he saw a guy with a baseball cap, blue jeans and a jersey that said “Bradley 15” on the back

“Wait could it be?”

Samuel and the guy walked past each other locking eyes as they walked through  


At this point when you described what he was wearing, I thought that he was playing Baseball in a park in front of a large group of people.

When you offer descriptive words like Baseball cap and his name on his jersey with a number tells the audience that he's not just wearing ANY Baseball attire..........but one that was custom made. This makes the audience believe that he was most likely playing baseball at that current point.



Describing the scene:

"So if I was Brad where would I be?"

"Samuel continued up the street looking left and right. The street, lined with Autumn trees didn't have that much traffic in the ways of both people and cars. Virginia was really a splendid place. It looked exactly what it would have looked like on a postcard.

Making sure to stay focused, Samuel continued on. It wasnt long before he came upon a small park surrounded by orange trees. In the clearing, he could make out the form of a boy roughly his age with a taller older girl with three other people. Testing a hunch, Samuel went to go investigate the scene."



And there ya go.
Just describe the scene a bit more. That way we know exactly what's going on.

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 4:08 am

I got you Undelos that makes excellent sense. I dont like getting very descriptive but in story means i wasnt descriptive at all i will try to be more desrcriptive and maybe edit the olde chapters thx again  ThumbUp

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:49 am

Start by writing it in a word document program over time. Give it at least a day before you submit it. It will give you time to just be lazy and not write every thing until the next day........ as well as allowing you to look over your work and add any corrections if you need to.

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:56 am

i write everything in word then copy and paste here i'm gonna post chapter 6 soon

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 12:37 pm

Chapter 6: The Four United

Zoe and Zero transformed into their mighty counterparts Bioshine and Prodigy. With the passing breeze Zoe and Zero locked eyes with their enemies… for the last time, in a split instant Zero got behind the nine Junkasaurus Rexes and in that same split instant 2 fell. Zoe just stared at the enemies giggling when the 2 fell

“Zero you show off”

“Actually I didn’t know I was fast”

“Zero you dumbbell! I was in that one!”

“Oh sorry Ace”

“So anyone gonna help me?” Mei asked over Samuel’s radio

“I got you” Zoe replied

Zoe spread her wings and took flight over skies of Tampa Bay. Ravaged buildings, destroyed streetlights, broken roads, and smashed cars is all Zoe could see in the air

“Wow Tampa was so beautiful and now it’s reduced to this…. Fuse” Zoe said with a tear in her eye

Zoe continued to fly over the destroyed city until she saw her friend flying…. With an endless swarm Tech Wings behind her

“Little help here Zoe”

“O gosh!”

Meanwhile with Zeroknight and Ace

“Phew, glad that’s over” Zero said wiping his hands together and standing on a pile of Junkasaurus Rexes

“Yea well you should head back to HQ I will check on the girls then we will meet you there”

“Kay don’t be late” Zeroknight said while teleporting to HQ

“Hope the girls are still alive”

Samuel running to Zoe’s direction saw a ravaged building on fire

“Help! Mommy help me!” a little girl said

The building was originally gray but burnt black due to the flames. The little girl around the age of 8 trapped inside suffocating by the bad air was screaming for help with all the power in her lungs

“Someone help me please” 

The girl was hitting a state of unconsciousness unable to scream any longer she collapsed in the front of her window 

“I have to find Zoe and Mei” Samuel said “Grrrr but I can’t leave that girl in there”

So Samuel ran into the burning building. When he ran in he saw burnt debris falling from the ceiling but he picked up a heavy object nearby and broke through the debris that was blocking the stairway. Finding himself upstairs there was three rooms one said “Mom & Dad” the second said “Jacob” and the third “Molly” so Samuel ran into the room that said “Molly” due to the name a and natural common sense, he saw the little girl on the floor barely breathing. He picked her up and was going to go the same way he came but the whole entire roof came down on it and blocking the way entirely

“You got to be joking this is bad very very bad”

Then suddenly the ceiling above Samuel and Molly came down, Samuel protected the girl covering her from the debris felt two hands under grab him down to the living room then underground then back outside
 
“Whoa what just happened?”

“I saved you that’s what” a boy said beside Samuel

“That armor heh it’s about time”

The boy was around Samuel age wearing blue armor that had a cape and a helmet that had three spikes on it

“So how was your trip Dane?”  Samuel asked

“It was good Ace” Dane replied

“Ace!! You ok!?” Brad yelled in the distance

“Yea!! I’m good get over here all this screaming is hurting my throat”

So Brad ran over to Samuel and Dane

“So did you get here?”

“We teleported after Zero told us what was going on” Brad replied

“Glad you guys came if you didn’t me and Molly would be toast”  

“Mommy is that you?” Molly asked

“Uh no I don’t know where your mommy is” Ace replied

“*sniff* where is my mommy?

“I don’t know”

“Mommy….”

“Hey don’t worry I will take care of you” Ace said

“You will?”

“Yea I promise”

“Ace, you sure you can do this?” Brad asked

“Yea I always wanted a little sister”

So Samuel picked up the girl and hugged her tight

“Ok Dane did you see Mei and Zoe?”

“No I didn’t but I saw some tech wings circling an area not far from here”

“Ok let’s go”

Samuel, Brad, Dane and Molly ran through the city. With the land ravaged and destroyed getting around wasn’t so easy the roads facing (Dane and Brad turning back to their human forms Brad was still wearing his baseball gear and Dane was wearing a red shirt, black jeans and he had black hair that complemented his shoes) upward were very hard to climb over is was life a horror movie

“There are the tech wings but where are your friends?” Molly asked

“Psst guys over here” Zoe whispered

There was Zoe and Mei in a dark alley behind a dumpster Zoe was back to her normal form injured and bleeding so was Mei but Mei was much more injured than Zoe

“Oh man are guys ok” Dane replied

“Y-Yea were fine” Mei replied

“Mei you need to get  back to HQ” Brad insisted

“No I’m fine”

Mei tried to get up but both of her legs are broken

“Aaaargh”

“Mei go” Zoe said

“Hey and take Molly with you” Ace added

“No I want to stay with you”

“Molly look at me it isn’t safe here I made I promise I wont die I promise” Ace said putting his hand on her head

“Ok remember you promised”

So Mei took Molly and pressed the button on her watch as they were waving goodbye a light enveloped them and they teleported away

“We should go to” Brad said

“No! Tampa is my home there is no way I’m leaving these guys here” Zoe exclaimed

“Well guys as friends you wanna do this… together?”

“Yea” Zoe replied

“Sure bro” Brad replied

“Ok” Dane replied

So Zoe barely having the strength got up and walked out in the open with the others

“Hey losers!”  Ace screamed

The tech wings turned around and flew towards them

“Zoe Bioshine!”

“Mister Darklingomega!”

“Dane Dweller!”

“Ace Cometshark!”

A immensely large light fell from the sky and enveloped the four friends, they turned into their Fusionfall counterparts but something was different they all had the angel’s prayer wings and all their clothing was made of light

“Whoa what is this?” Ace said

“I don’t know” Zoe replied

“Well whatever it is it’s good lets fight!” Brad exclaimed

“Yea Lord Dane will not be opposed, Lord Dane will destroy all his foes, Lord Dane brings pain to this game, so watch out when you hear his name!”

“Aaaaargh” They all screamed as they charged into the enemy

With a mighty war cry the four warriors charged into their foes with a mighty force one by one the Tech Wings fell , the heroes light consuming everything in their path but suddenly they felt something an odd sensation they couldn’t shake

“Did you guys feel that?” Ace asked

“Yea I did. How about you two?” Brad asked

“Yep defiantly” Zoe replied

“Yea it was cool” Dane replied

“Well put your hands in!” Ace exclaimed

When Ace, Brad, Dane and Zoe put their hands together a ball of light enveloped them 

“Go now! Mighty Prayer! Children of Eden!” they all yelled

Then suddenly a huge thunderbolt consumed all their foes in one shot not even one survived

“Did we just do that?” Zoe asked

“I think we did” Dane replied

“Guys were being teleported back to HQ!”

Another light enveloped the team and immediately they were transferred to a place…. Against their will.

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Wed Oct 09, 2013 10:41 pm

lol I loved how zoe sounded like a stereotype of an average girl, "O gosh"

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Oct 10, 2013 2:05 am

actually the reason why she said that because i didnt want her saying o shoot or o dang so i went with the next best thing o gosh

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Oct 10, 2013 9:47 am

So you add me in your comic, you make me come in, with a super bad-butt entrance, include my slogan, and yet you think my armor...is blue LIES ........... may god have mercy on thy soul Jelous

good chapter though Think

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Oct 10, 2013 11:07 am

K then u dont wanna have a cool super move in chapter 7? Think

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Oct 10, 2013 12:41 pm

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super movie Seriously .........you knows I was kidding right he-he Too Funny  , me want super movie Ed Face

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Tue Oct 29, 2013 12:13 pm

Chapter 7: The Other One
 
 
“Ouch!” Samuel said

“Ow!”  Dane exclaimed

“Hey!”  Zoe exclaimed

“Watch it!” Brad said

“Can you guys get off of me!?” Samuel yelled

“Sorry” they all said

So the four warriors got up off the floor and looked around. It was dark so they couldn’t really see anything but they touched the walls and their surroundings they felt computers and desks 

“Hey Brad you sure this is HQ?” Samuel asked

“Teleportation feel was the same I could be wrong” Brad replied

“You could be? No you’re wrong” Dane said

Welcome to my humble abode” a voice said

“What was that?” Zoe asked

The lights turned on and to their amazement it was a place resembling the Xtreme HQ, computers around the place and a hologram table in the middle and with little chairs in the room

“Oh so you’re speaking to us from a remote location” Dane said

Yes I am. No image for now I want to stay anonymous” 

“What do you want with us?”  Dane asked

“Actually I don’t need the three of you I just want Samuel, well specifically I want Ace”


“Yea whaddya want?”

You took my place Ace Cometshark and I want it back”


What place?”

“You will know eventually” 


“Come on this book has way to many secrets can you just tell me?” Ace said

“Book?” the man replied

“Sigh forget it. We’re are leaving guys”

Goodbye Ace and remember I will be watching you

“Stalkeeeer” Zoe said

Parting gift”


A light shined from the hologram and was aiming for Ace  

“Ace watch out!” Dane screamed

Dane jumped in front of Ace getting with the beam of light

“Dane! You ok?” Zoe yelled

“I’m fine just sore”

Well better him then air, goodbye folks”


A light like the one before immersed the team and they were teleported back to where they left

“What was that all about?” Brad asked

“I don’t know I’m just surprised that guy knew my name” Ace replied “Well we better get back to HQ to see what he did to Dane”

“Yea” the rest agreed

So Ace, Brad, Dane and Zoe were about to click their watches when they heard a horrific cry from a monster nearby

“Oh come on!” Brad screamed

“What now?”

 Giant orange claws was were making their way to the warriors and not just any monster it was massive like skyscraper massive. The beast came closer and closer and with each step it made a small tremor came with it. Soon the beast was visible to the warriors’ eyes, the beast looked like a crab but with long orange legs with green patches of fusion matter, it also had lava coming from its head. It was the creature feared in fusionfall legends it was Don Doom

“Oh ##” Ace said

“Don… Doom!?” Zoe exclaimed

“Run… Now!” Ace screamed 

The warriors’, running fast as they can, were escaping Don Doom. Like the terrain was before the road was cracked street lights damaged and buildings turned to rubble. Dane still limping from the previous attack from the hologram was about to get caught

“Dane speed up!” Brad screamed 

“I’m trying!”

“I got you!” Ace yelled

Ace took to the sky and with one flaunt of his majestic wings he sent a shockwave of air hurling at Don Doom, but due to the creature’s large size he barely flinched

“Ugh No use” 

Ace flew straight forward to the beast and delivered massive blows to Don Doom. Don Doom survived the blows and with one gash of his claw sent Ace flying through the buildings that were still up

“Bro!” Brad screamed

“Ace!” Zoe screamed 

Dane stopped and turned around to Don Doom

“Dane what are you doing!? Run!” Brad screamed

But Dane still stood there. Don Doom was getting closer and it was already too late for Brad and Zoe to turn back for him
Dane closed his eyes (even though you wouldn’t tell through the mask)

“Lord Dane will not be opposed… Lord Dane will destroy all his foes… Lord Dane brings pain to this game….”


Dane was covered in a gold and blue aura the energy was making the ground shake rocks rising because of his power, building rubble shattering it was like he was turning into a Super Saiyan. Dane suddenly opened his eyes

 “So watch out when you hear his name!!!” A light enveloped Dane’s hand until it was visible no more “Destruction Tremor!!”

Dane punched the ground with earth shattering force, the ground literally split in half consuming Don Doom, after he was consumed a volcanic eruption came from where he was swallowed and a giant fissure was all that was left of Don Doom

“Woah” Brad said in awe

“No way” Zoe said

“I’m awesome” Dane said collapsing

“Zoe, Brad do you guys read me? It’s Undelos we have Ace and we are teleporting you three back

“This is Zoe go ahead”

So Zoe, Brad and Dane were teleported back to HQ Dane was rushed to the emergency room while Brad and Zoe stayed in the Meeting room

“Kay guys I don’t want to be inconsiderate or anything but where did you guys go?” X asked
 
 
K that’s chapter 7 not sure if I have time for the other chapters but ok 

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Dec 05, 2013 4:14 pm

Chapter 8: True Power

Zoe and Brad arrived at Xtreme HQ they powered down and try to explain what happened.
 
“Hey where’s Ace?” Brad asked

“Right here”

Ace was limping and in his normal form
 
“Ok guys what happened?”
 
“Well you see what happened we were-“  Ace explained
 
“It was like bang! Then boom! Then the teleporter fwoop!” Zoe exclaimed
 
“Huh?” X said confused 
 
“Then the mysterious guy was all like! I was looking for you and then and then we were all like what?, then Dane was all like Ace watch out!”
 
“Zoe close…. Your mouth” Ace said
 
“Fine, I was just trying to explain what happened”
 
“What mysterious guy? And what happened to Dane!?” X exclaimed
 
“Alright here’s what happened. After we started to glow and stuff we beat the bad  guy, then we teleported into this dark place, and then this mysterious guy, who knew my name, was like I was looking for you so after that he tried to hit me with this beam and Dane jumped in front of me he was injured a bit when we teleported. And and then a Don Doom showed and”
“And then he was all like glowing and stuff and then booooooom!  He said his catch phrase then D-struction Tremor!!!! It was awesome”
 
 
“Hold on so you’re telling me that Dane was the one that caused the earth to split!!??”
 
“Yea my guess it was probably that beam”  Brad said
 
“Well let’s take a look at him”
 
X, Zoe, Ace and Brad walked to the infirmary that was literally to the left. When they arrived they saw robots looking a little bit like Computress attending to Dane
 
“Man he must have been drained he reverted back to his normal form”
 
Dane had short, flat black hair it only went to the middle of his ear he also had white T-shirt and blue jeans
 
“So…. Did I get him?” Dane asked
 
“Yea you did bro, nice work” Brad answered
 
“Heh heh ow”
 
“The things inside Dane’s body are… not meant for him” one of the robots said
 
“What do you mean not meant for him?” X asked
 
“See, the germs inside Dane are attached to his blood cells both red and white, they give the body max power for a certain moment”
 
“So you’re saying that those things caused Dane to use that super move?”
 
“Yes but it is killing him because its not in the right body”
 
“Can you see which body they belong into?” 
 
“We already have”
 
“Good who is it?”
 
The robot showed X the chart and to his surprise it was… Ace
 
“Ace? How can it be meant for Ace?”
“Even though you may not mean it that way but that sounds so insulting” Ace said
 
“Sorry but how is it me?”
 
“Hey Ace remember the guy was aiming for you!” Zoe screamed
 
“Your right but how are we going to take it from Dane and put it into me?”
 
“Leave that to the bots” X answered
 
One of the robots took Ace’s hand and showed him to a hospital bed beside Dane’s. They took a needle  and extracted the germs from Dane
 
“Whoa woah woah how do you know that’s just not his blood and none of the germs?”
 
“We have been studying it and discovered a way to extract the germs without taking too much of his blood”
 
“Too much!? I don’t want Dane in me!”
 
“Well sorry you just going to have to keep a little of his blood”
 
“Oh God don’t do this-“
 
Before Ace could finish the robot inserted the germs and Dane’s blood into Ace’s arm
 
“You crazy robot!!!!”
“Sorry Ace Cometshark you were talking too much” The robot said
 
“Ugh I feel the Dane coursing through my veins. Ugh I feel ugly no wonder he wears a mask”
 
 
“Really bro” Dane said
 
“Oh you’re awake”
 
“… Yea I’m awake”
 
“Soooo X what now?”
 
 
“Field test”
 
 
“Great now I’m a guinea pig”
 
“No we just have to make sure it works”
 
“Sigh. Who am I going to kill?”
 
“Fuse is going on the offensive since he knows we are gathering. I am sending you to Alabama”
 
“Any Xtremers there?”
 
“No, Fuse is terrorizing Alabama I’m guessing he wants to build his base there”
 
“Fine when do I leave?”
 
 
“Now”
 
“What about us?” Zoe asked
 
“You guys will stay in the meeting room with me in case the test fails and Ace needs backup”
 
 
“Backup!?” I don’t wanna do backup!”
 
“Zoe calm down” a boy said
 
“Oh its you” Ace said
 
A boy with brown hair and and a green and orange tech shirt he has Ultimate Big Chill wings and a have robotic face
 
“Nice to see you too Ace”
 
 
“Mister Sunboskov nice of you to join us” X said
 
 
“Nice to be here X”
 
“Alright guys lets go”
 
So X, Ace, Brad, Zoe and Zane went to the meeting room. Ace to the teleporter room while the other stayed the computer room.
 
 
“Ready Ace?”
 
 
“Yea”
 
X clicked the button and Ace instantly teleported to Alabama. Upon Ace’s arrival he saw buildings covered in green goo people in a panic and monsters of different kinds chasing them down.
 
“Oh my gosh this is a warzone” Ace said
 
“Daddy! Help me!” A little boy screamed
 
“Johnny!? I’m coming!”
 
A man was running against the crowd the find his son but  unfortunately he keeps getting pushed back.
 
“Daddy! The evil crab wants to eat me!” the boy cried
 
“Giant crab!?” Ace said
Ace rushed over to where the boy was, he looked up and saw a Don Doom trying to attack the boy. Don Doom gashed a building in two and it was about to fall on the boy.
 
“DADDY!”
 
“I got you!” Ace screamed
 
The half of the building was almost upon the boy. Too afraid to move the boy put his hands on his head and screamed. Ace ran then got his knees and slid under the building, he grabbed the boy and made it through.
 
“Did I seriously slide right through that?”
 
The building crashed to the ground, giant pieces of the building was flying at Ace and Johnny .
 
“Watch out!” Johnny screamed
 
“Ow kid you got some lungs. Ace Cometshark!”
 
Ace transformed and put his wings in front of him as a shield. Immediately the the debris broke on impact with his wings.
 
“Whoa an angel!”
 
“Yea I know I’m impressive”  
 
“Johnny are you ok?”
 
“I’m fine thank the angel guy”
 
“What angel?” 
 
Johnny looked around and Ace was  not there
 
“Well nevermind daddy lets get out of here” 
 
Ace flying high in the air looking for where the Fusion monsters are coming from
 
Ace do you read me?”  X said
 
“Yea I read you”
 
Readings show that the Fusion spawn site in the west
 
Mess’em up Ace!” Zoe exclaimed 
 
“Ok to the both you”  
 
Ace flew west upon his arrival he saw a giant terrafuser. Around the terrafuser they were, Don Dooms, Tech wings, fusion spawns and those orge looking things in peach creek
 
“Dang”  
 
The tech wings spotted Ace and they went for him immediately.
 
“Here we go again”
 
Ace being chased by Tech Wings started flying away. He flew up and dived down passed the Tech wings
 
“I just noticed wasn’t I limping in the last chapter? eh .”
 
Ace was flying circles around them. They were unable to catch him.
 
“Wow how did Mei get caught by these guys? This is embarrassing. Well I better end it”
 
Ace’s wings started to get hot until they caught on fire
 
“Hm? This is new, could this be my super move?”
 
Ace kept on flying the enemies until he reached supernova point instantly it burned them to naught
 
 
“Cool super move well I better be getting back now”
 
Ace pressed his watch about to call HQ until he felt a burn on his back
 
“…! What is that?”
 
Ace shifted his head to look at his back and he saw Fusion matter burning through his clothes
 
“Ow cant fly. But how? “
 
Ace’s wings started to stale up and one by one his wings would not move until he got to the point of falling. As Ace was falling his face shocked and he remembered the gash from the previous Don Doom
 
“But he didn’t hit my back. Uh Ace you idiot you guarded with your wings. Some must have slid to my back no wonder I didn’t feel it the first time”
 
Ace kept falling until the enemies saw him they immediately started throwing fusion matter at him. Ace screaming in pain was almost fully covered in Fusion matter. He fell to the ground defenseless enemies kicking and punching him and he could do nothing about it
 
“Get off me you- calm Ace you’re a Christian you don’t say those words”

 
Ace was near an unconscious state he was going to give up till his watch started to ring

 
“Ace! Ace are you ok what's happening out there?”  X screamed

 
Bro you alright!? Come on!”  Brad screamed

 


Ace you better get up you’re stronger than that!!” Zoe exclaimed 

 
Don’t die Ace who is going to replace you in the story of Zane Sunboskov? Hm maybe Ausi?” Zane said 
 
Ace was losing consciousness. The pain was unbearable, wanting to die Ace gave up on fighting the fusion matter until every inch of him was consumed. One of the Don Dooms grabbed him and climbed on top of the terrafuser and threw him in. Falling and drifting away and the same time Ace thought about how good it was to turn into his Fusionfall character, he also thought about how good it was to meet X, Oliver, Brad, Zoe, Dane and all the others. Ace near the bottom of the terrafuser about to be consumed by fusion roots a voice came from his watch  
 
I thought --you s--aid you wil---l be --my bro--ther. Do--n’t le-a-ve m-e . Don’t- le- m”  Molly said

 
The transmission ended. Ace heard Molly’s voice remembered the promised he made to her.  It 
reminded him of his friend Alice he once long ago. Alice’s last words before her death were the same.
 
 
“Molly….. Alice” 
 
A light was shining from Ace’s fusion matter cocoon. Ace’s power level was rising so fast that X could see it on the monitor in HQ. Ace broke free and flew fast he flew so fast that the flames from his wings came back. He flew all the way to space he saw a comets fly by and flew towards them
 
“Sovereign Light: Sun!”  
 
Ace grew two more wings and they all turned in to flaming wings and they got twice as big as they were. Ace gaining super speed rushed over to the comets.
 
“Super Move! Comet’s Shark!”
 
Ace kicked the comets straight down to earth. With quaking force the comets unleashed mayhem on the monsters. In no time at all the monsters and the terrafuser was dust. Ace flew back to earth just to see what art he has done
 

“x whistle x. I did a mighty fine job. X beam me up”

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Dec 12, 2013 2:15 pm

You know this story is excellent but you know what it could use?..... some Kyle.....hehe but yeah great story man read it all today and now I'm excited for more!

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Dec 12, 2013 2:17 pm

You know he could be in California around the bay area just sayin.....

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Dec 12, 2013 3:15 pm

About time somebody posted on this i was about to quit the story cuz i thought no one was reading

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Dec 12, 2013 4:05 pm

Oh sorryz I was taking a nap..... but yeah I LOVE!!! reading fanfics I just don't reply because I always say the same thing over and over and I feel as if people get annoyed..... so yeah I recently stated reading this and think it's great I'm not picky because people try (hey I didn't finish time of day from grumpy can you show where is that?)

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Thu Dec 12, 2013 11:10 pm

Kyle Comet wrote:
(hey I didn't finish time of day from grumpy can you show where is that?)

neither did I  Troll Face 

I got too random in the last chapters so everyone got lost and confused.
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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:59 pm

Chapter 9: Everyone’s got one to
 
“So Ace was the test” X asked
 
“It was good”
 
“Ace!!” Molly said running to Ace “I missed you so much I thought you weren’t going to make it”
 
“Nice job out there bro!” Brad said
 
“Nice work” Dane said
 
“That was amazing Ace you were like-“
 
“Thank you” Ace interrupted
 
Ace picked up Molly and headed outside to the meeting room. When he went there he saw Fusion Blossom and Fusion Buttercup accompanied by Oliver, Undelos, Glory, and two new people 
 
“Hey Ace! Nice work out there” Fusion Blossom said
 
“Thanks. So who are the new people?”
 
The two new people were boys the first one had blonde hair and he was wearing all steampunk attire and he had blue eyes and he had a dexter claw at his back. The second guy had black hair he also had a formal shirt on with a untied tie and black pants and black shoes that sort of complemented his dark brown eyes
 
“Hey Ace! Good thing you put me in your I was about to complain” the blonde guy said
 
Ace and everybody tilted their heads
 
“Story?”
 
“Forget it it’s me Kyle”
 
“Hey man what’s up!” Ace said shaking his hand  “Ok sooo who are you?”
 
“It’s Marcie! Can’t you tell!” Glory exclaimed
 
“No I can’t. Hey Grumpz”
 
“Hey Ace”
 
“Ok so where is Mister Sunboskov?”
 
“He’s on a mission” Oliver said
 
“Ah makes sense”
 
“Soooo what now?”
 
“Follow me” Oliver said
 
Oliver showed everyone an experiment in the research lab
 
“After we extracted some of those things that were in Dane I figured how to make them compatible with other Xtremers” 
 
“Aw and after I thought I was the only one with a super move”
 
“Yea! So getting some first tell me tell meeee!”  Zoe exclaimed
 
“Well since you guys are the first ones to find the stuff I would say Brad, Ace, Dane and Zoe should go” X said
 
“Yay!” Zoe yelled  
 
“Yes!”
 
“Looks like I’m doing D-struction tremor again after all”
 
“Does that you mean you have to leave again?” Molly asked
 
“Just for a little bit” Ace replied
“But before you go you guys need a shot” Oliver said
 
“Don’t worry Dane and Ace you guys don’t need one since you guys have your stuff” Undelos said
 
“We also found out that some of your ‘nanites’ are very similar some of you can perform ultimate tag team moves”
 
“Nanites? Ultimate tag team?”  Ace asked
 
“The stuff and a fusion move” Undelos explained
 
“Oh”
 
“Let’s get it to it then” Undelos said
 
Undelos took Brad and Zoe to the lab and X took Dane and Ace to the teleporter room. When they arrived they heard in the next room
 
“Wow these room are supposed to be noise proof” X said
 
Moments later Brad and Zoe showed up 
 
“Ow that robot is a meanie” Zoe said
 
“Yea that hurt” Brad added 
 
“You guys ready?” X asked
 
“Oh yea!” they all exclaimed
The team ran inside the teleporter room eagerly waiting to be teleported
 
“Ok guys you are headed to New York City, Fuse is still looking for a base. Your mission is to stop him simple”
 
“Then what are we waiting for?!” Zoe exclaimed
 
“Lord Dane whats some action” Dane said
 
“Ok then Fusion Blossom beam these guys down” X said walking out the door
 
“Teleportation in 5….4….3….2….1…. Teleport!”
 
Light engulfed the room the foursome beamed down to the big apple atop of Lady Liberty 
 
“Home is as beautiful as I remember” Ace said “Hey can we visit the Bronx?”  
 
“You heard X we need to stop Fuse” Brad said
 
“That’s weird I don’t see a single fusion monster” Zoe said
 
A giant explosion was heard in the distance
 
“You were saying?” Dane said
 
“You ready guys?”  Ace asked
 
“Ready!” they answered
 
“Ace Cometshark!”
 
“Dane Dweller!”
 
“Mister Darklingomega!”
 
“Zoe Bioshine!”
 
“Zoe ready to take the skies?”
 
“I’ll race you Cometshark”
 
The two flew at supersonic speeds to the explosion site
 
“I knew I should have equipped wings before the game closed down” Brad said
 
“Me too”
 
Tech wings were circling Brad and Dane from above
 
“Found our ride” Dane said
 
“Allow me” 
 
Brad crouched down and jumped right in the midst of the tech wings. One roundhouse kick was all he needed and the Tech wings were dropping like flies, they stacked down right in front of Dane
 
“Your turn”
 
Dane slapped two of the Tech wings, they awoke and screeched, Dane grabbed them by their necks 
 
“You guys are going to take us to that explosion the south you understand?”
 
They nodded in fear. Brad and Dane jumped on the backs of the Tech wings and made their way to the explosions. Ace and Zoe made it to the explosion, the site was horrible they were people running from Fuse’s monsters, building were torn down, and the electronic billboards were severed
 
“Of course this is how Fuse likes the place” Ace said
 
“Then let’s get down there and wreak some havoc”
 
Ace and Zoe landed to the see the worst kind of assassins their were, Newspaper Ninjas
 
“Aw I hate fighting those guys when I started out”
 
“Charge!” 
 
Zoe rushed in a horde of monsters she was like a reckless frenzy, her best friend the Fountain Pen Sword was slashing enemies left and right
 
“Ace want some?”
 
“Nah I think you got it” 
 
“Ok suit yourself”
 
Zoe kept on fighting soon her wings started to glow and lighting was shooting from her eyes
 
“Are you serious that early? The flipping chapter just started”
Zoe continued fighting then jumped to the sky she put her hands together and separated them slowly,  as she was doing that a golden circle appeared in front of her. She clenched her fists and flew through the circle when she did that she was covered in a golden array, at lighting speeds she rushed down in the midst of hundred of enemies 
 
“You boom now. Aaaargh Yang power: Bioshine Burst!”
 
Energy and lighting expelled from her body at a massive rate severing all monsters in the area. Ace turned his head in anger and confusion 
 
“How in the sake of bliblob did you get your super move that fast?”
 
“Cause I’m awesome duh”
 
Ace facepalmed 
 
“Whatever lets just find the next group of enemies”
 
“I think they already found us”
 
Ace and Zoe were surrounded by every single monster in the state of New York. Millions and millions of monsters surrounded them, the two went back to back plotting another strategy
 
“Any ideas Miss Reckless?”
 
“Um use your cometshark thingy”
 
“I will blow you up to”
 
“I can fly away”
“Not that fast” 
 
“Um uh I will explode again”
 
“Cant use your super move again without a break”
 
“Then what do we do”
 
“Leave that to me”
 
Brad jumped from the sky, the minute he landed he shadow got bigger
 
“Super move time”
 
“Oh seriousl“I will blow you up to”
 
“I can fly away”
“Not that fast” 
 
“Um uh I will explode again”
 
“Cant use your super move again without a break”
 
“Then what do we do”
 
“Leave that to me”
 
Brad jumped from the sky, the minute he landed he shadow got bigger
 
“Super move time”
 
“Oh seriously you to?”
 
“Shadow power: Abyssal Typhoon” 
 
Brad’s shadow turned into a giant circle
 
“You guys may wanna take flight”
 
As Ace and Zoe flew up they saw Brad’s shadow spinning the faster it spinned the faster the earth started to crack until it became a real black typhoon. The monsters tried to flee but most of them sunk into the darkness before they could run. Brad unable to keep the move together stopped it and his shadow returned to normal leaving a huge gash in the ground
 
“I wish that was my power” Zoe said
 
“Woah”
 
Even though Brad’s move took some monsters down they were still thousands to deal with
 
“May I impose on one of you for a ride?”
 
Ace swooped down grabbed Brad by the hand and flew once again
 
“Awesome move bro but we still need to deal with a lot of bad guys”
 
“Dane is on that building over there we can plan our next move there” Brad said
 
“Kay”
Zoe and Ace, with Brad in hand, flew to a large building not far from their location. Ace put Brad down on the building and landed himself with Zoe not far behind them 
 
“So Dane have any ideas?” Ace asked
 
“I don’t know” Dane replied crossing his arms
 
“Hey didn’t X say that we have a fusion move?”  Zoe said
 
“Yea! Ultimate Tag Team” Brad exclaimed
 
“But he said some are compatible” Ace said
 
“Lets look at our moves. Ace kicks rocks out the sky, Zoe blows herself up, Brad makes his shadow go on steroids, and I open ground and make things explode”
 
“Maybe you and Brad” Ace said
 
“We can try it but I still need a break before I can do my move again”
 
Actually you only need half power to do a tag team” X said through the communicator
 
“Oh I’m at half so let’s do this” 
 
Brad and Dane jumped in front of the bad guys
 
“Hey try to stop us” Dane said
 
“Too late losers!” Brad said in a king Julian voice
“D-struction Tremor!”
 
Dane punched the ground and then opened it
 
“Your turn Brad”
 
“Shadow power: Abyssal Typhoon”
 
Brad shadow went into the fissure that Dane then shadow tentacles rushed the ground grabbing nearby fusion monsters
 
“Ultimate Tag team: Hades Grip!” they both screamed
 
The tentacles started to spin creating a typhoon like before once a majority of monsters were taken the shut and gave off an enormous explosion 
 
“We rock!” Brad exclaimed
 
The boys gave a high five… and started to run because the monsters were chasing them now
 
“You guys can use yours anytime now” Dane said
 
“You ready Zoe?”
 
“Ready!”
 
Ace flew up to space as he did before
 
“Sovereign Light: Sun!” 
 
Ace grew two more wings and they all turned in to flaming wings and they got twice as big as they were. Ace gaining super speed rushed over to the comets.
 
“Hope you know what you’re doing Zoe. Super move Comet’s Shark!”
 
Ace kicked the comets and they flew to earth and blazing speeds. The comets turned to shark like they did before
 
“Dane Brad run faster this is going to get loud”
 
Zoe put her hands together and then slowly separated them like she did before and the same portal of light showed. As the sharks passed through Zoe’s circle they turned to angels with flaming blades covered in a golden array
 
“Bioshine Burst!”
 
Ace saw a giant boulder and gave it a flurry of blows until it looked like a lance he rushed down to earth at the pace of a rocket
 
“Zoe grab on!” 
 
Zoe grabbed the lance and flew through her ring of light. They both were covered golden array and so was the lance
 

“Burn away! Heavenly Crusade!”
 
When they landed the explosion singed all the monsters in the area, the NYC was now Fuse free. Zoe fell to her knees and looked at her hands
 
“I’m awesome!” Zoe shouted


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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:21 pm

Oh my flippin G. I forgot how good this was. I was reading some of our old fanfics, and my goodness we are so boss! I might continue this, since well nothing is on here anymore. And Geezus my typos, grammar, and my "hate to savor moments-ness" wow I really changed from then to now.

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Mon Mar 30, 2015 1:17 am

Bravo! Party

it's....it's beautiful

reminds of back in the day when I terrorized fusions with my king armor and HELMET....not mask  Jelous

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PostSubject: Re: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!!! 2015 release!!)   Mon Mar 30, 2015 6:09 pm

Reading this thread just made me realized, Kyle and "SUDoKu" both go by Kyle. Seriously

Guess its time to get caught up with Crisis Core. I should make it a Sticky along with everyone elses Fanfic that has uploaded on here. They're not alot so that shouldnt be a problem.

Just gotta find Zuko's fanfic too....
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PostSubject: Fusionfall Crisis Core (Chapter 10!!! 2015 release!)   Wed Apr 01, 2015 3:31 pm



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