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PostSubject: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 6:52 am


(This Character is not a main character or anything, just wanted to test my dramatic scene work)

ok so here's a preview of my comic that I'll be working on every month when I decide to start,  so it'll be 20 pages a month, I'll be charging 100 points on devart but I won't charge the members on here.


whoever wants a to read the chapters when they come out on devart just has to pm me and I'll send them the zip with the pages.




so yeah,  the pages would look like this. Depending on how many people like it like this will make me either start sooner or later.  


So it's going to be an action,  but there are gonna be some hidden stuff with each chapter, and things wont be what they seem,  or they will. Not everyone can be trusted.


Basically the story goes,  Humans who didn't want to wait for a god turned people into gods,  one per village, like mayors. That 1 person would be the villages personal servant and would grant their desires, each would become practically immortal, if they did die they'd be reincarnated instantly and would never be able to have their soul rest on the other side with their loved ones. 2 gods however decide that humans should never have godlike powers and set out to steal their powers and turn them back into humans.


lol well there's going to be more to it than that.   

No it's not ff related but that's because this was the story I wanted to write since I got into drawing and mangas.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 7:18 am

So, I'm guessing this is your comic from that Xtreme comic thread, right? If you know what I mean, and I'm not sure anyone does. As for my thoughts on the first page:



Guess it's because it's in black and white and I prefer colour. No Idea But hey, it's only the 1st page. There are still a gazillion pages to go.

I remember the comics I made as a kid lasting only 15. Razz Good luck.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 7:39 am

I can see the manga style in it...It looks awesome!   Rock 

I wish i could draw like you guys... But whatever, i'm satisfied with my story telling skills.  No Idea
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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 11:58 am

Is it just me or does the fact that the dog has 3 eyes on its body kinda freak me out.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 12:01 pm

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Is it just me or does the fact that the dog has 3 eyes on its body kinda freak me out.

It's Cerberus' brother. Or it's just something Grumpy thought up because that's how his mind works. Or it's some South American horror story. Or it's because this is a manga, and manga's are generally from Japan, and we all know what Japan's like.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 12:38 pm

well when I was thinking about her being surrounded by black fire it reminded me of mabinogi hell hounds.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 3:28 pm

I like it!!!  ThumbsUp2 

it definitely looks professional Smile


haha oh man I stink at comics...
for some reason it just doesn't work for me...

and i can't write down funny things,
so funny comics are impossible for me xD hahahaha


but i like this!

sounds like me and you are going to be busy Razz

since I'm going back to writing my story...
(remember the one i started writing on here?
well basically it's a prewrite on here.... 
the real thing is going to be in third person)
and I want to publish it in june  No Idea 

sorry... it won't be free to anyone lol
but it'll only be like 99 cents at most so it's no big deal Razz
it'll all go towards my college fund  Bloo Dance

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 10:26 pm

lol thanks, well you've already made comics so you can check that off your things to do before you fly list.

Oh?  how did you manage to get someone to publish it? (Has no idea how the book system works)

well 100 points on devart was about 1 dollar or so lol.

Lol yeah not like I was able to get on skype to say hey anyways.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Mon May 05, 2014 11:48 pm

What about me and Marciless, Glory?


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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Tue May 06, 2014 11:07 am

lol still,  99 cents sounds too cheap for what I read from your book, it was really good,  you should at least go to 10 dollars lol I mean who doesnt have 10 dollars.


still depending on how many are made who knows what printing costs. I saw a video about how the whole thing with printing is done, wasn't as cheap as I thought it would be.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Tue May 06, 2014 11:25 am

hey, you might not wanna let the folks on dA know about the forum freebies, we don't want a flood  Troll Face

P.S. $10 for a comic?  Think 

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Tue May 06, 2014 12:46 pm

nah she wrote a book, and it was really good so she should raise the price, and because she would end up wasting more cash making them then receiving , so it would be like she payed people to read her book.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Wed May 07, 2014 12:17 pm

oh i'm not publishing that one yet hahahaha
that one WILL be more expensive, like 10$ or something...


but do you remember the one i was writing about "diving into darkness"?
yeah that one is just going to be a short story...
i think i'll just add 3 more (so 6 total)
which i can do pretty easily..
then i'll just edit it...

but Amazon.com has this thing called Kindle Singles.
where basically you can self publish a short story (basically anything from 10 to 100 pages, and the price depends on how well known you are and how big it is and stuff)
plus they're only e-books, so you don't have to pay to get it printed, that's why they're so much cheaper Smile

so that's what i'm going to do for that...
but then at least i'll have something published before i graduate  No Idea 




but yes, i'm a novel writer dragoon, not a comic person xD hahahahahaa
i can't draw for money....

at least in comic styles...

what i'll do, is i'll have like pictures at the chapter headings for my books, because i really like those... the ones in the septimus heap books are pretty cool, my style is actually based off of those a little now that i think about it

of course they're a lot better :
 



hahaha anyways...

yeah i technically haven't finished anything yet, but maybe i'll write another chapter of the story tonight... then finish by the weekend... then edit and have people read it and help me fix it and stuff.. then publish it Razz


oh don't forget making a cover for it o.o
i'll probably take a picture or something...
drawing a cover seems too stressful...

so all in all i'll probably get it really published by the end of june Smile


maybe if i can make enough money on it,
i might not have to get a job this summer xP hahaha





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http://www.amazon.com/gp/feature.html/ref=amb_link_354802082_6?ie=UTF8&docId=1000700491&pf_rd_m=ATVPDKIKX0DER&pf_rd_s=browse&pf_rd_r=0T5S9BQJYCCXY5NVD9KG&pf_rd_t=101&pf_rd_p=1514725782&pf_rd_i=2486013011

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Wed May 07, 2014 12:24 pm

$10 for a book?  Think 

hehe, i used the same joke again *nudges*

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Wed May 07, 2014 12:28 pm

hahahahahaha ikr?

well maybe once people actually know that i'm a good writer
 i can raise the price and become a really rich person  Awesome 



then i'll marry a rich movie director *cough cough my bf cough cough*
and we'll live happily and richly ever after  Ed Face 




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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Wed May 07, 2014 1:47 pm

lol I'm sure riley's gonna make some awesome movies,


hipster ones for sure Think     maybe he'll make your book into a movie 


and yeah,  I was shocked how twisted your mind is! Looks like we have way more in common than I thought 

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Wed May 07, 2014 2:53 pm

Ahahahahahahaha
I'm not as carebearish as i seem  Sure Lol 

And y'all never believed me when i told you xP


Hahaha

It's not thaaaat dark...
Actually ot kind of is...



I'm excited for the short story though...
I think when it's done you guys will really like it Smile 



And lol as long as i get to buy pretty dresses for the premiers I'm fine xP hahahaha
Oh speaking of that, i need to show you the dress i got for prom Razz
it was none of the ones you picked...
But that's cuz i found it later Razz

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Wed May 07, 2014 11:58 pm

you asked me to pick dresses,  and I out of kindness say yes and then you go and buy something else :C  I hope you drop jelly donut jelly on it!

lol I'm sure you still look great in it anyways.  Unless it's the pink renaisance one that made you look like someone from 1791 

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PostSubject: Re: The Eclipse Of Lies (Manga Page)   Thu May 08, 2014 9:54 am

Lol naaah this one is white xP

It looked like i was getting married xP


Hahaha i'll show you some of the pictures on skype sometime Razz

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