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PostSubject: Diving into the Darkness chapter 4   Wed May 07, 2014 3:54 pm

Past Chapters (just in case you need to refresh your memory) :

part 1:
 

part 2:
 

part 3:
 



Part 4:



The streets were empty.

My only hope of getting out of here is gone.

I sat down. The tears cam without my willing.

It all seems too familiar.
The betrayals and emptyness.

I stay sitting as the city around me melts away into a meadow.

The warm breeze brushes my hair and suddenly the sky is dark.

When i look up to the clouds i see bright shining stars.

Just when i start to feel hopeful the clouds come back and cover the sparkling sky. A forest appears around me and the trees turn dark and ominous reminding me of my loneliness. The shadows scare me too much so i close my eyes and let the warmth return and take me away.

In the morning, it's cold.

A hand is shaking my shoulder and my eyes open immediately. There he is. I smile and give him a hug before he can speak.

The new room is cold and bleak and without any door.

We just sit and talk as the room gets colder.

The hours get longer and more painful, but i don't really mind, it's not too bad. But he gets more and more restless.

"we need to stop sitting around"

"what? Why?"

"because this is ## that's why."

He begins to pace and look around. I can see a smile form on his face as he finds a crack in the wall tlhat wasn't there before. His fingers trace the crack until he's able to find an opening. He pulls the thin metal wall back and there's a beach i've never seen before.

He sighs a breath of relief and steps out, "c'mon! It's perfect out here!"

It's gets brighter outside as my heart starts to sink, "but, it wasn't too bad in here. Don't leave me."

His eyes suddenly become confused as the door starts to close more and more.

Though, the walls begin to disintegrate around me and the door is shutting trapping him inside.

"No!" i start shouting and remember i don't know his name, "Hey! Are you okay?!" but i get no reply.

I start to punch the metal until it becomes flimsy. When i break the wall i see that it's sunny on the other side too. He looks up at me with watered eyes, but he doesn't move.

He just looks.

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PostSubject: Re: Diving into the Darkness chapter 4   Thu May 08, 2014 12:03 am

wooww,  that whole thing at first sounded like sad and then you had them all like bored and smiling  Sheep 


I Lyke Dat.


anyways, it's really thriller like,  gives me the chills.
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PostSubject: Re: Diving into the Darkness chapter 4   Thu May 08, 2014 9:51 am

well part 4 was the girls perspective in case you didn't notice...

and this is just a super rough rough rough draft xP
so it won't be exactly like this...

it'll make more sense in the end...

plus we could have a "discussion" after i finish the next to parts to kinda explain my whole thought process for those who were confused xP haha


it'll be better after i edit it a few times xP

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