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PostSubject: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:33 am

I got bored and I started to draw.Bored 


(Note:This Photo is Subjected to change)
This is my first time drawing muscle on a character and I would appreciate your criticism so........  Don't be afraid to insult my work  MadBoss

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:44 am

Image not showing, buddy. Troll Face
Here's some help if you need it:
Usually you have to copy the image URL/link which
ends in something like .jpg or .png or .gif or similar image formats.

E.g.

[ img ] http://r27.imgfast.net/users/3214/11/50/58/smiles/3147896512.gif [ / img ]

(but with no spaces.)

To get the direct link (like the one above) of your image,
you can right click it, click copy image location (in FireFox).
You could also reupload to an image hosting site. (Making an account on some sites
would enable you to delete the image if you change your mind on keeping it online.)

Hope that helps. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:23 am

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Image not showing, buddy. Troll Face
Here's some help if you need it:
Usually you have to copy the image URL/link which
ends in something like .jpg or .png or .gif or similar image formats.

E.g.

[ img ] http://r27.imgfast.net/users/3214/11/50/58/smiles/3147896512.gif [ / img ]

(but with no spaces.)

To get the direct link (like the one above) of your image,
you can right click it, click copy image location (in FireFox).
You could also reupload to an image hosting site. (Making an account on some sites
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Hope that helps. Razz
Has it changed

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:25 am

Not bad, Slim. Smile
The pencil line work looks scruffy, maybe it's the photo quality. Shrug 
The abdominal muscles should be a little shorter (thus pectoral muscles should extend a little bit lower)
and perhaps with some abdominal muscles to the side of the torso.
(Look at a reference to get what I mean.)

The curving you use in your shapes for the arms, etc. are pretty good
and make it a little more realistic. (I sometimes draw too blocky.)
The proportions with the thighs and legs should be adjusted slightly but
the neck and head were drawn quite well. It looks as if the character is facing
at an angle rather than straight at the 'camera'/viewer.

Technically speaking, you can get away with how you drew the chest muscles
but I'm just giving constructive criticism based on how it looks to me.
To some it's perfect and to some it's different to how they would have drawn it.

E.g. look at this drawing I drew: (it's not necessarily the 'right' way to draw it, it's just
my way of doing it. But you can modify your way if necessary to improve. Smile
But note I drew devil/demon X with a shirt in this one so the muscles are less defined.
And sometimes I represent X as muscular with a thin layer of fat to make him
look bulky and less 'clean cut' in the muscle definition department. Depends on the look I'm trying to achieve.)


http://xtremefusionfall.forumotion.com/t5269-devil-demon-x

Slim, your drawing doesn't look finished but I can tell you have a lot of potential. Yep 
Do you draw often?
I think with some references and/or tutorials or just some practice,
Slim could become one of the titan artists here. Think

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:31 am

Reminds me of the Thing. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:37 am

Okay i actually love the "titan artist" phrase xD it's so epic  Awesome 


And slim!!! This is awesome!!!

Waaaay better than my first attempt at muscles >.>


I actually think this is really awesome,
And the sketchy way you do your lines is really cool too Razz

pretty much i would just say to adjust the way the legs are,
But besides that i actually think it's super awesome ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:44 am

XLR8 147 wrote:
Not bad, Slim. Smile
The pencil line work looks scruffy, maybe it's the photo quality. Shrug 
The abdominal muscles should be a little shorter (thus pectoral muscles should extend a little bit lower)
and perhaps with some abdominal muscles to the side of the torso.
(Look at a reference to get what I mean.)

The curving you use in your shapes for the arms, etc. are pretty good
and make it a little more realistic. (I sometimes draw too blocky.)
The proportions with the thighs and legs should be adjusted slightly but
the neck and head were drawn quite well. It looks as if the character is facing
at an angle rather than straight at the 'camera'/viewer.

Technically speaking, you can get away with how you drew the chest muscles
but I'm just giving constructive criticism based on how it looks to me.
To some it's perfect and to some it's different to how they would have drawn it.

E.g. look at this drawing I drew: (it's not necessarily the 'right' way to draw it, it's just
my way of doing it. But you can modify your way if necessary to improve. Smile
But note I drew devil/demon X with a shirt in this one so the muscles are less defined.
And sometimes I represent X as muscular with a thin layer of fat to make him
look bulky and less 'clean cut' in the muscle definition department. Depends on the look I'm trying to achieve.)


http://xtremefusionfall.forumotion.com/t5269-devil-demon-x

Slim, your drawing doesn't look finished but I can tell you have a lot of potential. Yep 
Do you draw often?
I think with some references and/or tutorials or just some practice,
Slim could become one of the titan artists here. Think
Thanks for the criticism. I will take you advice into account  I'm already making changes. I even got my older brother to peer review my work

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:45 am

Gloryangel wrote:
Okay i actually love the "titan artist" phrase xD it's so epic  Awesome 


And slim!!! This is awesome!!!

Waaaay better than my first attempt at muscles >.>


I actually think this is really awesome,
And the sketchy way you do your lines is really cool too Razz

pretty much i would just say to adjust the way the legs are,
But besides that i actually think it's super awesome ^.^
Thank you and i will change it

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:17 am

I have implemented people advices
 
I have taken this image with my phone. With the Nexus 5 I got on my birthday on July the 16th 

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:22 am

Now you're just not being fair

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:24 am

Slim's peer reviewing?   Seriously 


(*Whispers*)


 Too Funny Titan material... Too Funny 


EDIT: huge improvement with the legs and shading.  Yep Nice work, Slim. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:35 am

XLR8 147 wrote:



 Too Funny Titan material... Too Funny 
 What does that mean

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:41 am

Dang... i need to get krakin.....  Too Funny  Too Funny  Too Funny 

Get it?
Titan material?
Get crackin'?

Tehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe  Too Funny  Too Funny   Too Funny 


@slim,
X refers to the main artists here as "titan artists"
And he's saying that you're becoming a titan artist Razz
basically you just need to draw more and then we can all admire your masterpieces

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:27 am

I like it, muy macho

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:38 am


Here is a quick sketch on a 360 view of a character design I did in 20 minutes 

Here is the finished design 
(Note: I suck at drawing hands and feet)
 
I am unhappy about the face..... I NEED TO INPROVE

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:02 pm

Noice slim.

I'm gonna start practicing so I can show you guys my "master pieces".

My style is cartoon...-ish

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:05 pm

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So is mine, but I'm not complaining. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:06 pm

Yeah. I'm not complaining either.  BananaLlama  Ahee

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:15 pm

Seriously SLIM?!
UH WOW.


Never thought I'd see you again.


Glad to see you taking an interest in drawing! It looks really nice.

If you have a genuine interest in art, I want to let you know that you WILL improve here no matter what. Everyone who has drawn and uploaded here has. Grumpy is our Most improved person. Oliver follows right behind him.

I say this based off of the art that they FIRST uploaded on here compared to their latest piece.

Their art is radically different from what they used to upload. Yours will too in time..........so long as that's something that you're into.

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:19 pm

Meanwhile Glory and Undelos haven't really visibly improved as they don't really need to. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 1:53 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 1:59 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:01 pm

Oliver I want in... Evilz

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:04 pm

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Fine, you can be the... I don't know. No Idea

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:10 pm

BTW we should all put it in our sigs...

I can be the... uh... I don't know either...

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:18 pm




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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:20 pm

Noice Grumpy, noice...

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 3:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:34 pm

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Blah blah
Blah blah blah 
Grumpy is our Most improved person. Oliver follows right behind him.
Blah blah
And basically glory just keeps doing what she's doing
Blah blah blah



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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Thu Aug 14, 2014 6:09 am

Oh man.
Grumpy and Undelos, you two are hilarious! lol!

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Thu Aug 14, 2014 8:35 am

Gloryangel wrote:
GrandMaster Rex wrote:

Blah blah
Blah blah blah 
Grumpy is our Most improved person. Oliver follows right behind him.
Blah blah
And basically glory just keeps doing what she's doing
Blah blah blah



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Glory,

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Thu Aug 14, 2014 10:22 am

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Fri Aug 15, 2014 12:46 pm

No Idea Oh Glory.

I didnt mention you because you came here with already good stuff.

Looking at your drawings I could tell you knew what you were doing as far as poses, basic anatomy and just general skill.

You've improved since you've gotten here. Its not a complete 180 like Grumpz or OZw but that doesnt mean its a bad thing.

It just means you came in here already with some skill.





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And now, after 2 years, he's putting more detail in his work, has a good grasp on how to use a photo editing/manipulation program, and is getting more confident in his skills:

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Now, this is where I would then show Grumpy's before and after stuff.............but as  curteousy to a fellow artist who ALSO hates seeing embarrasingly old stuff, I will leave it to his discretion on whether he wants to show you.

But he has madly improved. like superseriously improved.  Seriously 

Maybe you can ask him nicely and he'll show you.  Razz 


Even X has improved alot too even though I bet he feels he hasnt.
I mean, Look at that art review:





Look at that January. You've always had it.
Im just super happy for those that made a complete turn around in their drawing ability.

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Fri Aug 15, 2014 12:54 pm

Undelos, did you really have to use that comic page as the 3rd example of my improvement? I still cringe whenever I see that one. Seriously Still love how my Paradox one came out, though. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Fri Aug 15, 2014 1:07 pm

looks nice slim, just try to fix the leg, its kinda slender but other than that you would slowly improve on by practice  3DGrin

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Fri Aug 15, 2014 1:35 pm

wow! even you came back ven? Nice to see you after so long!

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Fri Aug 15, 2014 1:41 pm

The Legend Continues


me and Ven hang out every day now, just teaming up in LOL or talking about all other kinds of stuff, like league.

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:47 pm

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No Idea Oh Glory.


Look at that January. You've always had it.

dat january tho...
My best piece of work  Awesome 
Same with december xP


Oh man xD i should really show you guys some of my older stuff...
I love looking at my old stuff because it's hilarious xD
And i know that i was proud of it at one point...
I did go through a phase where i redrew every "cute anime couple" picture on youtube...
No joke  Seriously 

I mean, in reality, i've only been here for a year...
So i haven't had as much time,
Plus it's hard because my style is different..
It's not like soooo cartoony or all anime-y so it's hard to compare it to things  No Idea 

Thank you though  Embarrassed2 




Oh man, speaking of drawing,
I haven't been doing much lately,
Sorry guys...

Anyone have any ideas?  No Idea

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Sat Aug 16, 2014 12:52 am

GrandMaster Rex wrote:

- This is Oli's stuff from 2 years ago:



- Even X has improved alot too even though I bet he feels he hasnt.
I mean, Look at that art review:

- I feel as though I've never seen those comics Oliver made, except maybe
the first one. (Even though I was shocked with the likeness of Undelos that Oliver captured lol.
Like seeing your FF character on TV. Seriously )
The newer comics....I must have missed them. They all look awesome, Oliver! Impressed

And I don't think I've improved much. Little practice goes a short way.

Ven wrote:
looks nice slim, just try to fix the leg, its kinda slender but other than that you would slowly improve on by practice 

Hey Ven! Smile

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GrandMaster Rex wrote:
No Idea Oh Glory.


Look at that January. You've always had it.

dat january tho...
My best piece of work  Awesome 
Same with december xP


Hahahaha! LOL. I think she meant February. Whistling
We've always had nothing. No Idea

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PostSubject: Re: Slim's Drawing    Sat Aug 16, 2014 2:50 am

I did mean February. Dont know how that happened.  Shrug 

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