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SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:37 pm | |
| A fanfic I have planned. It is pretty much a retelling of Fusionfall through Cordelia's eyes, and will involve many NPC's, Nanos and Missions not found in the game. Even stuff that is easing itself into Fusionfall (Johnny Test, Total Drama). I will write up a first chapter soon, but be warned: these chapters will be LONG. I don't know how to flesh them out yet, but my work in Fanfics has given me the ability to make a chapter anywhere from 300 to 12 000 words long. Sneak Peek InfoGuides will be changedThe Mojo Jojo and Edd guides are removed, and instead there are six guides. Two of which are Windsor Gorilla and Pandora. Ben 10 and Courage the Cowardly Dog will have very large involvements
Courage and Ben are Cordelia's guides throughout the early story and good friends throughout. Mostly part missions
As in missions that have multiple parts. Few, if any, missions will be handled by filler characters. No Sym-Bionic Titan
I dislike the show and everything in it. This will be until I get around to watching and liking the show. If I dislike it after the first episode or two, then it will be permanently removed. Hints To Characters Involved (Updated throughout story)
- DNA mixing isn't a bad thing.
- "Hello friend, this world will fall. Animals, children, families and all. Their only hope is this young little girl. This is my queue to get a little...naughty."
- "The worlds falling...I just can't do this. I'm sorry."
- "Would you like to take a look at my lunchbox?"
Chapter (1) Nano Hints (Vague)
- "Don't have a party without me!"
- "Or suffer the consequences..."
- Hot-headed Ben 10 alien
Critique. First chapter should be up soon/eventually.
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Angelic Demon
Kyle Comet
FusionFall Name : Mace Kenhero Level : 36 Posts : 2752 Join date : 2012-08-01 Age : 29 FF Location : In your shadow stalking you.....
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:39 pm | |
| hm cool can't wait and put a link when you are done |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 22 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:40 pm | |
| Cool story bro! Is it okay if you could add a character named Dark? He's a EVO with electrical powers and is very hyperactive and tends to have electricity spark off of him and is always happy unless something really mortifying happens like someone dying. |
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SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:41 pm | |
| I'd probably post it here. I have too many Fanfics clogged up already. And probably. I need some unique characters. |
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Officer Second
FusionFall Name : Officer Second Level : 35 Posts : 2069 Join date : 2012-06-23 Age : 25 FF Location : Orchid Bay (The Docks)
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:42 pm | |
| Go for it man! Have fun |
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Angelic Demon
Kyle Comet
FusionFall Name : Mace Kenhero Level : 36 Posts : 2752 Join date : 2012-08-01 Age : 29 FF Location : In your shadow stalking you.....
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:44 pm | |
| oh can you add a char named cecil hes a kid who always gets into trouble but once the war starts he realises who he really is (a paladin) |
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SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:45 pm | |
| I forgot to mention, and this will be in the first post, everything from Sym-Bionic Titan will be removed. I dislike the show, and it's concept. I may add references to it, and if I ever get around to watching it this viewpoint may change, but until then no Titan for you! Maybe. I'm not looking for too many OC's, but many could work. |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 22 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:46 pm | |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 7:05 pm | |
| Nice! And how can you not like Sym-Bionic Titan?! It's pretty good. Not excellent, but not as bad as CGI "cartoons"... It's also quite funny at times.
Anyway, the title... Is it in Latin? Just asking. |
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SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 12, 2012 7:08 pm | |
| The title to the topic? No. (If that's what you meant.) Also, I have never watched the show, as I said, and have never actually seen footage. If I ever get around to watching it, it'll be added based on my like level. |
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SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:47 am | |
| I have started writing up Chapter 1. I have planned a different 'Tutorial'. It'll be a fun little surprise, and the nanos won't be Finn, Rex or Alien X (though they are in it). Check the first post for hints.
EDIT: I have watched the trailer for Sym-Bionic Titan and am actually eager to watch it. I don't like it yet, but I'm not as reluctant to watch it as I was Twilight (still haven't watched: manhood=intact). |
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Officer Second
FusionFall Name : Officer Second Level : 35 Posts : 2069 Join date : 2012-06-23 Age : 25 FF Location : Orchid Bay (The Docks)
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:26 pm | |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:00 pm | |
| Soooo..................... You disliked the show................before you even knew what it was about????
what made you dislike the show in the first place? |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 22 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:02 pm | |
| - Undelos wrote:
- Soooo.....................
You disliked the show................before you even knew what it was about????
what made you dislike the show in the first place? WONDERS OF THE BLACK MAGIC UNIVERSE!!!!!! *bashes head through walls and makes sure Undelos sees* |
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SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:29 pm | |
| I disliked the show BECAUSE I knew nothing about it. That makes sense, right? |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 22 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:13 pm | |
| - SUDoKu wrote:
- I disliked the show BECAUSE I knew nothing about it. That makes sense, right?
Nooope |
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Moderator
hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:52 pm | |
| - SUDoKu wrote:
- I disliked the show BECAUSE I knew nothing about it. That makes sense, right?
The heck? Thats like saying.. Oh I hate my neighbour because I dont know anything about him which instantly means I have to dislike him! The hell? Man thats stupid. |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 22 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:55 pm | |
| - HomChoi wrote:
- SUDoKu wrote:
- I disliked the show BECAUSE I knew nothing about it. That makes sense, right?
The heck? Thats like saying.. Oh I hate my neighbour because I dont know anything about him which instantly means I have to dislike him!
The hell? Man thats stupid. Hom... Not trying to be bossy or anything but could you keep it down of saying Hell? Cause technically it's a swear word |
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hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:59 pm | |
| AWW HELL! Sorry hell man its sure hella annoying when people say hell I mean for hells sake!
Im pretty sure a 6 year old has used this word... |
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RETIRED Administrator
XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:04 pm | |
| Hom, it's allowed but not excessively. 'Heck' would be a better replacement though. Just sayin'. BTW, Hom, you're in part 3 but it will take forever to edit part 3 man. |
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hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:09 pm | |
| In part 2 X calls Hom right? So is that after Hom joins the legends? |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 22 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:36 pm | |
| @Hom ... Anybody know why THIS guy is a mod?! |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:39 pm | |
| - SUDoKu wrote:
- I disliked the show BECAUSE I knew nothing about it. That makes sense, right?
Being Blunt..........
No. No it doesn't. |
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RETIRED Administrator
XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:40 pm | |
| - Undead Brad wrote:
- @Hom ... Anybody know why THIS guy is a mod?!
Dunno, been asking the same question a dozen times. @Hom, he doesn't call Hom but wonders where Hom is. They receive a signal and go into the trap. Hom snipes the wrong person. |
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Member
SUDoKu
FusionFall Name : Grim Luciusrockets, Zak Leeaura, Spike Amberblade Posts : 524 Join date : 2012-08-05 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Cordelia Fusionaura Sun Aug 19, 2012 9:41 pm | |
| It makes sense to me... And me (not having Austar) asked my friends who've watched the show what it was like and they said "It's not that good.". Being gullible, I believed them. |
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