My post on dA got 85 views and was relatively popular. However I listed a link underneath the Poster but I dont know how much people liked the trailer.

I figured we could start trying to develop SOMETHING to run with as far as the plot goes.......other than the fact Bella staged her own kidnapping so X can play the Knight in shining armour other than the fact that Bella gets kidnapped. That's all the info that I could give for the poster.

Alot of people liked it. I really want to give them something to look forward to from us.



Any Ideas on Plot elaboration?

Yea....uhm.....elaborate "elaboration"

Me and Slim De Jackson came up with a plot long ago but we are very open to
suggestions so that our story is longer and we can release the movie in parts.
Let's just say it involves a disappearance, world in terror, 6 months later the arrival of new legends,
Slim is seriously evil and gets fusion assassins to cover his back and defeat the legends before they get to him,
[insert mindless but epic chase scenes and cliche lines from the characters] oh and there's a scene where someone gets kicked off by XLR8 falls off
a volcano....

by accident. Of coarse.

You saw the poster, he's the ginger/orange haired dude. (the bad quality graphic)
I guess he's evil looking, I mean if you want to also be evil, there's absolutely no problem with adding you as a villain.

He's registered as SlimTheJackson but hasn't posted anything yet.
His YouTube channel is https://www.youtube.com/slimthejackson2

You know, Bella being kidnapped isn't actually the main dilemma in the film;
the main issue the legends face is the fact that the entire world is in the hands of the Fusion Empire.
The Bella being kidnapped thing was just to lure the legends in a trap. (and arguably because Slim may uh just be crazy for her)

I have devised many routes the story could unfold, including having more than one
event coinciding with others; this (I hope) will leave an interesting perspective
but a full, complete, finished, no flaws, bullet proof, solid script or storyline has not actually been made,
I'm sure it won't be a problem due to the fact the storyline has mainly been decided; we just need to get specific
interesting events in there at the right time.

If you have any ideas for example, some sort of object that attracts interest while being versatile enough to
have more than one meaning and purpose; for example XLR8 may have a sword constructed from diamond, however,
maybe it's from a twin sword set, the other twin sword belongs to Slim or one of his followers.
This can give us the opportunity to give it history. (so we can explain the dual weapon's evil usage in the past and now one of them belong to a good hearted
human called XLR8 )

Little things change films entirely, the main story is relatively simple but the details are probably what the audience will
be most interested in and we need to emphasis the details. So yeah Bella being kidnapped might actually be the most interesting part of
the film to some audience members. (E.g. ArmorSpark )

The swords can even be given a fundamental status and purpose to the film.
Slim might need both swords to unlock something or to have the power to go to war with other worlds, or
something else completely over the top; but this is just a little FusionFall movie, so who cares, as long
as we're all entertained.
You do know I am making this stuff as I go along, the swords were never significant until I made my previous post.
We are being laid back about this because we can. :bananalama:
A story composed by many people may outmatch one made by a genius.[/size] ...maybe....possibly....

Bringing back the dead, the mistranslation and the ace of spades ideas are certainly ones I
will consider!
You know sometimes my imagination is like a volatile substance, when inactive, not very exciting,
then when someone throws something flammable at it, boom instant ideas!

If only ArmorSpark were here...hey there's irony in that, armor-SPARK and he tends to light up ideas immediately judging from his fanfics.

Thanks for the ideas! Keep them coming if possible.
Ok, different aspects to the story:

- Diamond swords > are a necessity for Slim's universal domination.
- Bella, hmm, maybe we could put high school history in this, Slim may have been embarrassed and humiliated by I don't know, her rejection to his UM friendship?
- Original 7 Legends > they conquered the fusions, sent them underground (hence the fact fusion enemies fall under the ground when defeated)
and the rise of the fusions are the fault of Slim De Jackson.
- I forgot what Taluring's role was.
- If Hom Choi decides to jump on the movie bandwagon, who could he be? (He has white hair but not the same hair style as my character, he has a blindfold too,
maybe that'll give you an idea)

Ah, if this was animated...but oh well, unrealistic game play to movie conversion it is then.
ONE PROBLEM I face in my synopsis, WHY did the legends disappear, I mean, because they're gone, lives are at stake; there must be a valid
reason to why this happened. I haven't come up with one, I dismissed that sadly.

That is ...ABSOLUTE GENIUS!!
You have expanded the horizons of this motion picture.
I can imagine the film now.
Formally 7 Legends, Slim may have broken a human law, killing of other human beings to
get what he wants.
He is the Lucifer figure of the group, his trail of bad influence brushed off of
the other legends and they slowly began to argue, one by one leaving the circle.

Throwing ideas.

I hate giving spoilers but I think I've figured out a semi-decent ending. But it needs more work, knowing the ending
almost always ruins the whole experience but you people don't mind?

No no no. You dont want to make him too evil in the beginning. It wouldn't make much sense why he was kept as a hero if he had "SERIOUS" issues.
Could just make him a Lone wolf or some kind of character that doesnt play by the rules or perhaps just a wild Maverick. (wild, guns blazing nut )

Or he could be some sort of Warhawk, Always wanting to either dish out the first lick or just solve all his problems with the edge of a Bullet.


Best example:
S.W.A.T


This was a movie released here in the U.S. a couple of years back. The antagonist was a former SWAT officer that worked with the main character. He wasnt evil persay, just a Gun-ho, anti team person who liked to break protocol. His partner kinda just followed suit but it got him into trouble and he gave him up in that instance when both of their badges were about to be taken.

No, I didnt get my Idea from this movie. Its just that It sometimes is a common mistake for story writers to leave parts in movies or stories that dont make any sense. He cant be a "Lucifer-like" character but hold the position of a Hero.

Unless you want to be COMPLETELY DARING and make him a Sociopath. You gotta have guts....and good writing skills to pull that off...






Oh. You can always just delete this thread.

@Taluring, LOL, there are fragments of spoiler material circulating ALL OVER the forum xD!
Any way, I think as a Lucifer figure he could first start off as the eager to do right in front of everyone and claim glory, kind of guy.
(The n00b, put simply)
Then he tries to compete with his own team, see he isn't nice from the start either, well not entirely, he's VERY misguided.
He then gets annoyed how well these guys are doing compared to him, he goes against law and stages an 'accident'
in which he purposely tries to fix to become a superior figure among the group and the whole community.

This accident results in a death and he is exposed, he gets withdrawn from the group, they kick him out.
He gets a new nature, the jealousy evolves, he then sabotages the group's friendships by spreading things around.
The final blow? He pretends a member murdered a fellow member's friend or family member when in fact Slim was the murderer. (He gathers false evidence)
They believe there are traitors and liers amongst themselves, thus split up and go their own ways, hanging up the 'cape', they
return to their normal lives or hide out in an area of the world inhabited by humans.

With the Legends out of the way, Slim takes his diamond sword and causes the Fusion Empire to rise. (Not sure how but it's a start)
6 months later, hell is on Earth and people (after panicking) have decided to evacuate and hide in caves. Some were unlucky enough to become slaves or worse.

From this deserted world, with few above ground human habitants, a handful, (7 to be precise)
train and decide to fight back as a team.
This is the formation of the new 7 Legends. (Which Hom joins to form 8 )

XLR8 147 wrote:

@Taluring, LOL, there are fragments of spoiler material circulating ALL OVER the forum xD!
Any way, I think as a Lucifer figure he could first start off as the eager to do right in front of everyone and claim glory, kind of guy.
(The n00b, put simply)
Then he tries to compete with his own team, see he isn't nice from the start either, well not entirely, he's VERY misguided.
He then gets annoyed how well these guys are doing compared to him, he goes against law and stages an 'accident'
in which he purposely tries to fix to become a superior figure among the group and the whole community.

This accident results in a death and he is exposed, he gets withdrawn from the group, they kick him out.
He gets a new nature, the jealousy evolves, he then sabotages the group's friendships by spreading things around.
The final blow? He pretends a member murdered a fellow member's friend or family member when in fact Slim was the murderer. (He gathers false evidence)
They believe there are traitors and liers amongst themselves, thus split up and go their own ways, hanging up the 'cape', they
return to their normal lives or hide out in an area of the world inhabited by humans.

With the Legends out of the way, Slim takes his diamond sword and causes the Fusion Empire to rise. (Not sure how but it's a start)
6 months later, hell is on Earth and people (after panicking) have decided to evacuate and hide in caves. Some were unlucky enough to become slaves or worse.

From this deserted world, with few above ground human habitants, a handful, (7 to be precise)
train and decide to fight back as a team.
This is the formation of the new 7 Legends. (Which Hom joins to form 8 )

..........................* Massive audience appluad* Awesome dude!

Lol thanks dude!

Taluring wrote:

Sounds like a Plan!
We'll go with it.

Taluring approves...hmm I must have written something decent. Lol.

Hom Choi I made your profile.

Maybe Slim finds out that a particular weapon or item grants him the ability to control Fusion matter....

Maybe....this item is in short supply and he needs more to destroy those pesky legendary heroes.

And just what if....the hero that they thought was killed those many years ago actually ia still alive and aiding the heroes from the shadows.

Yeah great idea Taluring.

You guys completely ruined my idea to go outside for a walk today....

Out of all the days to FINALLY come on the boards here....you guys picked the very day when I successively talked myself into taking one.

Thanks

Taluring wrote:

You guys completely ruined my idea to go outside for a walk today....

Out of all the days to FINALLY come on the boards here....you guys picked the very day when I successively talked myself into taking one.

Thanks

Nooooo problem.

So...wait.....am I like the rookie or something...are you guys gonna BARD ME!?!?!?!??!!?

I said, he's a (new) legend who protects Bella as the legends are forced to split up but then Pistol fails at his job and Bella is taken.
To be honest, the absolute biggest problem we face is the fact that
half our actors are not in contact.
Maybe we should narrate something like "new followers joined the legends as some legends lost stamina through this long and
unforgiving journey."

I wrote the story draft, on another thread, feel free to read it when you want. (No rush since we'll film at around March)
I also need to decide what voices suit which character.