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Guys the official thread for my new book now this is very serious extremely serious I need at least five of you to be in it

hey guys i'm gonna start making the book soon i need at least too chars or more from Kyle Brad Oliver and some other person who wants too make a char

well guys thx for the named chars i will be begin writing shortly and Brad go wild with the other chars will ya anyway goodnight

Ace Cometshark wrote:

well guys thx for the named chars i will be begin writing shortly and Brad go wild with the other chars will ya anyway goodnight

i have one to her name is ursula! but my computer decided to be dumb and crash when i was done... so yep expect it tomorrow!

Ace Cometshark wrote:

well guys thx for the named chars i will be begin writing shortly and Brad go wild with the other chars will ya anyway goodnight

Okay so, how about Alice, looks almost exactly the same as Zex because they are twins but she is shorter, about an inch, and wears her hair in a side pony tail and has bold silver eyes and her powers would be mechanics (meaning, robots, futuristic weapons and armors ect.)

mecha blaster too cool

hey guys i have the deadline its tomorrow at nine who knew?

OLIVER GET YOUR MOUSE ON THIS THREAD!!!!!

Ace Cometshark wrote:

OLIVER GET YOUR MOUSE ON THIS THREAD!!!!!

You mean this one?

your playing with me boy (nice one) anyway dude make another char he has to be smart just to let you know you dont have much time

How about you tell me what parts of my last character didn't make it, and I'll make it pretty much the same guy bit with a few changes.

ok well everything didnt make it who knew

Ace Cometshark wrote:

ok well everything didnt make it who knew

How he can be a boy called ronald, he is the same height of zex. has Brown Shaggy hair and blue eyes and is make cool tech and his powers from the cards are water or fire!

Ace Cometshark wrote:

ok well everything didnt make it who knew

...I hate you sometimes. Lol, kidding.

How about we go with the idea Brad just had? Hey, that rhymes!

oh man tech water and fire are taken you were on a roll dont stop

Ace Cometshark wrote:

oh man tech water and fire are taken you were on a roll dont stop

Fine, we'll stick with intelligence.

but i need something from you pal

Ace Cometshark wrote:

but i need something from you pal

SHABBAFLABCRABBAKRAGADORGUS! Lasers, then.

no mhmmmm maybe

Ace Cometshark wrote:

no mhmmmm maybe

Sticking with lasers, maybe cloning as well?

i'm just gonna keep the prof

ok guys we have

Name Powers Weapons
Zex/Z Ice unknown

Alice Machines : Mechanical things

Prof.ZW something : unknown

Leslie/Lez Thunder/Lightning Bow and arrow

Rosie/Rose/Belladonna Flowers Lance

Rachel Air Bowstaff

Rex/T Greg Power of Dinosaur (explains the name) Brass Knuckles

Samuel/Ace Energy Sword

Christopher/Chris Earth Hammer

Donavon/ Don Water Axe

Katherine/Kat/Kathy Fire Knives & Daggers

Lucy/Luce Lunar power Whips made of Lunar Energy

Nicholas/Nick Shadows Scythe

Vertex Just your average gunslinger Guns (obviously)

hey Brad i need you to give Zex a weapon and Oliver i ned you to give the prof a weapon i will ask my parents if i can show the story online hopefully they will say yes (dont get your hopes up though)

hey guys long time no see anyway i made like 20 chapters on this book but sadly my mom wont let me post anything on here yeaaaaaa but i can show you guys backstories of the characters if you like

Ace Cometshark wrote:

hey guys long time no see anyway i made like 20 chapters on this book but sadly my mom wont let me post anything on here yeaaaaaa but i can show you guys backstories of the characters if you like

I dont get it? Officer and now Ace.


Is this website that bad?

Sure! You can give us the backstory! And remember, if you ever need help with it ask the writer right here.

thx bro give me a sec

Zex and Alice

Zex and Alice the Xylon twins were not the best family, Zex had a tempers but Alice is a sweet girl, with there dad in jail for a crime he was framed for and mom sick in depression and there little siblings living in a dirt poor society Zex and Alice at there young age wanted to find a job that can benefit everybody, so while they were looking for a job they ran into a old man who was a teacher of a nearby dojo he decided to hire them after he heard their tragic tale, three months later they raised enough money for there family and Zex learned how to use a claymore nunchucks and a mace while training but AlIce was more into tech stuff improving security systems around the dojo, month after that an explosion put the world on the edge, after its passing the sensei of the dojo presented Zex and Alice with their greatest reward to cards that said Triple F...

more stories coming tomorrow

Saweet dude! Can't wait to hear more!

Stories?!

Makes s'mores

im redy

Tyrone "Rex" Gregory

Tyrone Gregory was a poor 17 year old boxer he had a good life as a boxer and as a brother, he trained with Mohammed Ali personally he never liked fighting much but everyone said he was good at it, he was the predator of the ring given the name Rex for his swift and powerful "kills" he wanted more in life than boxing so while he was punching a punching bag he found a card and guess what it said

ok sry for bringing my old posts up but since i can make stories again i should start with this one

Sly Shark Comet wrote:

ok sry for bringing my old posts up but since i can make stories again i should start with this one

So I'm not the only guy who makes stories here lol

dude your far from it i like made stories before anyone on this site

Sly Shark Comet wrote:

dude your far from it i like made stories before anyone on this site

I wrote stories while I was in my mother's stomach

lol jk, like it matters who made stories first.

it really doesn't as long as there made

Sly Shark Comet wrote:

it really doesn't as long as there made

So what's all this then? Betch yo stories full of all them bloody monsters and what not, cheerio

um no its usually about hand to hand gone good

Sly Shark Comet wrote:

um no its usually about hand to hand gone good

I smell cheeseburger apocalypse

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