Because only X asked for it... Production of Multiversal Alliance has started. Early, in fact. I was originally going to start after the profiles were finished, BUUUUUUUT yeah. As usual, comics will be posted here and on my dA as soon as they're finished. If you have any questions (Cause this takes place after The 0 Man prologues and 7 Legends: Origins, so things might be confusing) If you missed Page 1, here it is:

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Feedback would be appreciated this time. Especially since this has more than just The 0 Man characters. Maybe... the story? Or... really, just what you think about the story so far.

EDIT: Oh, I'm also not very good at backgrounds, either.

lol I like it.

dexter dexter

The Grump wrote:

lol I like it.

dexter dexter

Yeah, I think some of this up as I go along.  

I like it too!

Hahaha dexter dexter... i thought that was funny too :3


Haha i would suggest trying out bigger/smaller box combinations, or at least making the boxes bigger so there's not so much white but that's not really a big deal

 i still like it  


As for the story?
Umm you said you wanted feedback, but there's not much i can give right now xD
From this it looks like it'll be awesome!

Man we're such a cool forum..
Doin' things...


How exciting xP

Gloryangel wrote:

I like it too!

Hahaha dexter dexter... i thought that was funny too :3

That's good. Wasn't meant to be that funny, but I'll take it.  

Gloryangel wrote:

Haha i would suggest trying out bigger/smaller box combinations, or at least making the boxes bigger so there's not so much white...

Yeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhh little problem. Because I'm using squared paper so I don't have to whip out the ruler all the time, there's also those two holes on the left. I'll try to think of something, though.

Gloryangel wrote:

As for the story?
Umm you said you wanted feedback, but there's not much i can give right now xD

Maybe not this little into the story. Maybe at the end. Or at least near it.

Gloryangel wrote:

Man we're such a cool forum...

We are NOT a cool forum!  

We are an XTREME forum!  

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

We are NOT a cool forum!  

We are an XTREME forum!  

What's the differenc.....  
Cool comic so far, Oli!
I like the way you draw and colour things in it. (The shadow effects are awesome.   )
Your drawing style suits it quite nicely.
The way you drew Jake and Dexter.
I can't help but think the pacing is slow.
Lol in my comic, clone X was already fly kicking Professor Utonium by the third page!
(And that's counting the front cover.... )

XLR8 147 wrote:

Lol in my comic, clone X was already fly kicking Professor Utonium by the third page!

Think of it like a movie, X. Some action movies start slow and then pick up a quarter of the way through. Although with Oliver disappearing on the first page...

And ya know what's weird about your post? I was thinking that sometime in a 7 Legends comic, X has a clone. This was before you made that post.  

Wait, why would an X clone be useful in the 7 Lege... Oh...  
Might as well clone X and fire you all.  
Wow can you imagine if X actually did that. 
I'm a nasty piece of work.

I was just on my way home when I suddenly thought of the rest of this comic, and thought of Fusion Oliver gaining the ability to make himself look like the real Oliver, and having the 7 Legends (Who may or may not appear in the comic. This is before they come back, though) trying to find out who the real Oliver is.

Then I thought of putting it in a 7 Legends comic, and having two Xs instead of two Olivers. Then came your post.

I also see you've changed the title, X. It's not actually a FusionFall comic. Well, it is, but it's also an 0 Man, a Super Penguin, a Fire Duck and a ToonTown comic. Hence the word "Multiversal".

Ok, so it's actually an 0 Man comic, hence why the prologue focuses on the third 0 Man prologue.

"I am the 0 man"

I cant stop laughing lol

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

I also see you've changed the title, X.

Thought you'd get more views if people immediately saw FusionFall Comic in the title
and also if people Google FusionFall Comic, they may arrive to my and your FF comic.
Besides, it is a FusionFall inspired comic.
What's your definition of a FusionFall comic?
I'm tryin' to help you out, brother.   
And just advice in future, if you're going to do a "previously on..."
at least make it available otherwise it would be confusing like
starting half way through a TV series.

XLR8 147 wrote:

Besides, it is a FusionFall inspired comic.
What's your definition of a FusionFall comic?

One's that more FusionFall than anything else.

XLR8 147 wrote:

And just advice in future, if you're going to do a "previously on..."
at least make it available otherwise it would be confusing like
starting half way through a TV series.

Well... That's why I said people can ask about what's going on. Anyway, I was going to do that, but some man with wings thought it would be better if my drawings were in a comic.  

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

but some man with wings thought it would be better if my drawings were in a comic.  

I hate this guy already. 

Spoiler:

There's no point being grown-up if you can't be childish sometimes.

Oh for my danny phantom comic i made,
I just printed out squared paper using word...

It's actually kinda awesome,
But i'm pretty sure i already showed you guys a loooong time ago...

But that's pretty useful,
But really its just a suggestion  



And it wasn't "funny funny"
(lol i just realize what i said xD)
But more "that's-so-true funny"
Because i thought i was like one of the only people who said that xP

Gloryangel wrote:

Oh for my danny phantom comic i made,
I just printed out squared paper using word...

It's actually kinda awesome,
But i'm pretty sure i already showed you guys a loooong time ago...

I don't think you did. Well, the Danny Phantom comic, yeah, but not the squared paper.  

Gloryangel wrote:

And it wasn't "funny funny"
(lol i just realize what i said xD)
But more "that's-so-true funny"
Because i thought i was like one of the only people who said that xP

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Why didn't you say so?  

lol well i've drawn on all the squared paper...

hahahaha just go onto word/publisher and make it, it's pretty easy...

i still have it saved on my computer actually,
*goes and finds it*

Jordans templates DO NOT USE:

see? it's pretty simple just use the shape tools and you can make your own


it's easy,
 but effective  


Edit:
the pictures are being mental,
but you get the point hahaha

Page 3 is up! Sorry it's late (Even though I'm not actually working to much of a schedule). Had to babysit for a family friend yesterday morning, then got distracted by internet, then The Time of The Doctor...

But it's finally up! And no, didn't take Jordan's advice, and probably never will (Well... for the panels, anyway).  Anyway, I'm off to bed soon. 4am...

Fusion fall,  with toon town.

 

The Grump wrote:

Fusion fall,  with toon town.

 

Just read some of the other posts on here, you'll find the answer.

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

But it's finally up! And no, didn't take Jordan's advice, and probably never will (Well... for the panels, anyway).  

meanwhile:

Interesting third page.  
The combining of universes, that's awesome!  
Is there going to be a front page?
Can you estimate how many page there will be?

XLR8 147 wrote:

The combining of universes, that's awesome!  
Is there going to be a front page?
Can you estimate how many page there will be?

Thanks! Good to know this is going better than planned.  Guess all those profiles paid off. As for the cover:

Spoiler:

Remember?  And no, no idea how many. Back in 2006-2009, my comics usually lasted for about 15-20 pages, which may seem long, but it wasn't. You could finish readin in just under 2 minutes.  

I'm aiming for 30, but it could be over, or it could be under. We'll just have to wait and see.

@Glory:

Dude...that front cover doesn't have a title.
Did you learn nothing from my comic?  
And I'm planning there to be about 24...26....pages something like that
in my comic. It will just depend on how long I stretch the execution of the story.

XLR8 147 wrote:

Dude...that front cover doesn't have a title.
Did you learn nothing from my comic?  

Well normally I would put in a title, but:

1. I made that cover a couple of months ago (Hence my old logo and King Crazy's old clothes)
2. I couldn't be bothered.

Anyway, because I highly doubt anyone here would get it, there's a Coach Zucchini reference in page 3. Coach Z is a Youtuber who tells people how to fight Cogs and how to use their gags efficiently. "I am not your mummy" is his catchphrase.

1. No   

2.  Coach Z?



(if you know what that's from you're my new bff xP )

@Glory:

1. New Boots?
2. THIS Coach Z:



I forgot how weird that voice was. 

... they're not boots...
They're my cats....

Gloryangel wrote:

... they're not boots...
They're my cats....

  This isn't at your weirdest is it?

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

Gloryangel wrote:

... they're not boots...
They're my cats....

  This isn't at your weirdest is it?

  

Ask marcelo

Gloryangel wrote:

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

Gloryangel wrote:

... they're not boots...
They're my cats....

  This isn't at your weirdest is it?

  

Ask marcelo

I'll take that as a no.

I got shivers down my back now.

@Grumps: If you're going to be sarcastic, do it properly.

Anyway, page 4 is up. Will there ever be more dialogue? Will the story ever pick up? Find out in a few pages time! Maybe page 5.

EDIT: Oh, Jordan, your signature's not showing.

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

@Grumps: If you're going to be sarcastic, do it properly.

I would if I was actually talking to you.

The Grump wrote:

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

@Grumps: If you're going to be sarcastic, do it properly.

I would if I was actually talking to you.

Now you know to say who you're talking to.

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

The Grump wrote:

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

@Grumps: If you're going to be sarcastic, do it properly.

I would if I was actually talking to you.

Now you know to say who you're talking to.

because obviously I didn't make it obvious enough.

The Grump wrote:

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

The Grump wrote:

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

@Grumps: If you're going to be sarcastic, do it properly.

I would if I was actually talking to you.

Now you know to say who you're talking to.

because obviously I didn't make it obvious enough.

You didn't make it obvious at all so... yeah, not obvious enough.  

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

Gloryangel wrote:

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

Gloryangel wrote:

... they're not boots...
They're my cats....

  This isn't at your weirdest is it?

  

Ask marcelo

I'll take that as a no.

The Grump wrote:

I got shivers down my back now.

She said to ask me, so I responded by giving a reaction to "This isn't at your weirdest is it?"   "Ask marcelo "

So, long story short oli...

You don't wanna see me when i'm angry... at my weirdest

Well why didn't ya say so?  

Page 5 is up! No shading due to the Sun (Even though it isn't the Sun) and the Time Fissure both producing light.