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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 6:33 pm | |
| I got bored and I started to draw. (Note:This Photo is Subjected to change) This is my first time drawing muscle on a character and I would appreciate your criticism so........ Don't be afraid to insult my work
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XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 6:44 pm | |
| Image not showing, buddy. Here's some help if you need it: Usually you have to copy the image URL/link which ends in something like .jpg or .png or .gif or similar image formats. E.g. [ img ] https://2img.net/u/3214/11/50/58/smiles/3147896512.gif [ / img ] (but with no spaces.) To get the direct link (like the one above) of your image, you can right click it, click copy image location (in FireFox). You could also reupload to an image hosting site. (Making an account on some sites would enable you to delete the image if you change your mind on keeping it online.) Hope that helps. |
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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:23 pm | |
| - XLR8 147 wrote:
- Image not showing, buddy.
Here's some help if you need it: Usually you have to copy the image URL/link which ends in something like .jpg or .png or .gif or similar image formats.
E.g.
[ img ] https://2img.net/u/3214/11/50/58/smiles/3147896512.gif [ / img ]
(but with no spaces.)
To get the direct link (like the one above) of your image, you can right click it, click copy image location (in FireFox). You could also reupload to an image hosting site. (Making an account on some sites would enable you to delete the image if you change your mind on keeping it online.)
Hope that helps. Has it changed |
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XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:25 pm | |
| Not bad, Slim. The pencil line work looks scruffy, maybe it's the photo quality. The abdominal muscles should be a little shorter (thus pectoral muscles should extend a little bit lower) and perhaps with some abdominal muscles to the side of the torso. (Look at a reference to get what I mean.) The curving you use in your shapes for the arms, etc. are pretty good and make it a little more realistic. (I sometimes draw too blocky.) The proportions with the thighs and legs should be adjusted slightly but the neck and head were drawn quite well. It looks as if the character is facing at an angle rather than straight at the 'camera'/viewer. Technically speaking, you can get away with how you drew the chest muscles but I'm just giving constructive criticism based on how it looks to me. To some it's perfect and to some it's different to how they would have drawn it. E.g. look at this drawing I drew: (it's not necessarily the 'right' way to draw it, it's just my way of doing it. But you can modify your way if necessary to improve. But note I drew devil/demon X with a shirt in this one so the muscles are less defined. And sometimes I represent X as muscular with a thin layer of fat to make him look bulky and less 'clean cut' in the muscle definition department. Depends on the look I'm trying to achieve.) https://xtremefusionfall.forumotion.com/t5269-devil-demon-xSlim, your drawing doesn't look finished but I can tell you have a lot of potential. Do you draw often? I think with some references and/or tutorials or just some practice, Slim could become one of the titan artists here. |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:31 pm | |
| Reminds me of the Thing. |
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Gloryangel
FusionFall Name : Josie Gloryangel Level : 17 Posts : 2654 Join date : 2012-09-03 Age : 27 FF Location : ♫ ♪ where the party's at ♪ ♫
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:37 pm | |
| Okay i actually love the "titan artist" phrase xD it's so epic And slim!!! This is awesome!!! Waaaay better than my first attempt at muscles >.> I actually think this is really awesome, And the sketchy way you do your lines is really cool too pretty much i would just say to adjust the way the legs are, But besides that i actually think it's super awesome ^.^ |
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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:44 pm | |
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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:45 pm | |
| - Gloryangel wrote:
- Okay i actually love the "titan artist" phrase xD it's so epic
And slim!!! This is awesome!!!
Waaaay better than my first attempt at muscles >.>
I actually think this is really awesome, And the sketchy way you do your lines is really cool too
pretty much i would just say to adjust the way the legs are, But besides that i actually think it's super awesome ^.^ Thank you and i will change it |
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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:17 pm | |
| I have implemented people advices I have taken this image with my phone. With the Nexus 5 I got on my birthday on July the 16th |
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Gloryangel
FusionFall Name : Josie Gloryangel Level : 17 Posts : 2654 Join date : 2012-09-03 Age : 27 FF Location : ♫ ♪ where the party's at ♪ ♫
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:22 pm | |
| Now you're just not being fair |
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XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:24 pm | |
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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:35 pm | |
| - XLR8 147 wrote:
Titan material...
What does that mean |
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Gloryangel
FusionFall Name : Josie Gloryangel Level : 17 Posts : 2654 Join date : 2012-09-03 Age : 27 FF Location : ♫ ♪ where the party's at ♪ ♫
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:41 pm | |
| Dang... i need to get krakin..... Get it? Titan material? Get crackin'? Tehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe @slim, X refers to the main artists here as "titan artists" And he's saying that you're becoming a titan artist basically you just need to draw more and then we can all admire your masterpieces |
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GrumpMySheep
FusionFall Name : Grumpy Druidsheep Level : 36 Posts : 869 Join date : 2013-12-04 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 9:27 pm | |
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SlimTheJackson
FusionFall Name : Slim De Jackson Level : 0 Posts : 661 Join date : 2011-12-21 Age : 25 FF Location : Old Times
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Tue Aug 12, 2014 9:38 pm | |
| Here is a quick sketch on a 360 view of a character design I did in 20 minutes Here is the finished design (Note: I suck at drawing hands and feet) I am unhappy about the face..... I NEED TO INPROVE |
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Bo Ajaxbaboon
Bo
FusionFall Name : Bo Ajaxbaboon Level : 37 Posts : 468 Join date : 2013-03-15 FF Location : Sitting on an uncomfortable chair.
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:02 am | |
| Noice slim.
I'm gonna start practicing so I can show you guys my "master pieces".
My style is cartoon...-ish |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:05 am | |
| - BoTheLich wrote:
- My style is cartoon...-ish
So is mine, but I'm not complaining. |
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Bo Ajaxbaboon
Bo
FusionFall Name : Bo Ajaxbaboon Level : 37 Posts : 468 Join date : 2013-03-15 FF Location : Sitting on an uncomfortable chair.
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:06 am | |
| Yeah. I'm not complaining either. |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:15 am | |
| SLIM?! UH WOW.Never thought I'd see you again.
Glad to see you taking an interest in drawing! It looks really nice.
If you have a genuine interest in art, I want to let you know that you WILL improve here no matter what. Everyone who has drawn and uploaded here has. Grumpy is our Most improved person. Oliver follows right behind him.
I say this based off of the art that they FIRST uploaded on here compared to their latest piece.
Their art is radically different from what they used to upload. Yours will too in time..........so long as that's something that you're into. |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:19 am | |
| Meanwhile Glory and Undelos haven't really visibly improved as they don't really need to. |
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Bo Ajaxbaboon
Bo
FusionFall Name : Bo Ajaxbaboon Level : 37 Posts : 468 Join date : 2013-03-15 FF Location : Sitting on an uncomfortable chair.
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 3:53 am | |
| - Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:
- Meanwhile Glory and Undelos haven't really visibly improved as they don't really need to.
Yep. #TheFallenCookie |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 3:59 am | |
| - BoTheLich wrote:
- #TheFallenCookie
Glory! Undelos! Grumpy! We need to make this a real thing. |
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Bo Ajaxbaboon
Bo
FusionFall Name : Bo Ajaxbaboon Level : 37 Posts : 468 Join date : 2013-03-15 FF Location : Sitting on an uncomfortable chair.
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:01 am | |
| Oliver I want in... |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:04 am | |
| - BoTheLich wrote:
- Oliver I want in...
Fine, you can be the... I don't know. |
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Bo Ajaxbaboon
Bo
FusionFall Name : Bo Ajaxbaboon Level : 37 Posts : 468 Join date : 2013-03-15 FF Location : Sitting on an uncomfortable chair.
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:10 am | |
| BTW we should all put it in our sigs...
I can be the... uh... I don't know either... |
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GrumpMySheep
FusionFall Name : Grumpy Druidsheep Level : 36 Posts : 869 Join date : 2013-12-04 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:18 am | |
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Bo Ajaxbaboon
Bo
FusionFall Name : Bo Ajaxbaboon Level : 37 Posts : 468 Join date : 2013-03-15 FF Location : Sitting on an uncomfortable chair.
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:20 am | |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:46 am | |
| Fallen cookies.
Havent we had enough sadness for one week? |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:14 am | |
| - GrandMaster Rex wrote:
- Havent we had enough sadness for one week?
Not really, no. Last week, yeah! But that's not Xtreme-related. |
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Gloryangel
FusionFall Name : Josie Gloryangel Level : 17 Posts : 2654 Join date : 2012-09-03 Age : 27 FF Location : ♫ ♪ where the party's at ♪ ♫
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:34 am | |
| - GrandMaster Rex wrote:
Blah blah Blah blah blah Grumpy is our Most improved person. Oliver follows right behind him. Blah blah And basically glory just keeps doing what she's doing Blah blah blah
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XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:09 pm | |
| Oh man. Grumpy and Undelos, you two are hilarious! |
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GrumpMySheep
FusionFall Name : Grumpy Druidsheep Level : 36 Posts : 869 Join date : 2013-12-04 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:35 pm | |
| - Gloryangel wrote:
- GrandMaster Rex wrote:
Blah blah Blah blah blah Grumpy is our Most improved person. Oliver follows right behind him. Blah blah And basically glory just keeps doing what she's doing Blah blah blah
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Glory, your Senpai noticed you. you dont need her. |
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XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Thu Aug 14, 2014 12:22 am | |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 2:46 am | |
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Oli Zombieweasel
FusionFall Name : Oli Zombieweasel Level : 36 Posts : 13322 Join date : 2011-11-19 Age : 27 FF Location : Aionios
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 2:54 am | |
| Undelos, did you really have to use that comic page as the 3rd example of my improvement? I still cringe whenever I see that one. Still love how my Paradox one came out, though. |
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Ven
FusionFall Name : Rex Shadowworth Level : 36 Posts : 502 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 25 FF Location : Offworld Plaza (Future)
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:07 am | |
| looks nice slim, just try to fix the leg, its kinda slender but other than that you would slowly improve on by practice |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:35 am | |
| wow! even you came back ven? Nice to see you after so long! |
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GrumpMySheep
FusionFall Name : Grumpy Druidsheep Level : 36 Posts : 869 Join date : 2013-12-04 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:41 am | |
| The Legend Continues
me and Ven hang out every day now, just teaming up in LOL or talking about all other kinds of stuff, like league. |
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Gloryangel
FusionFall Name : Josie Gloryangel Level : 17 Posts : 2654 Join date : 2012-09-03 Age : 27 FF Location : ♫ ♪ where the party's at ♪ ♫
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 7:47 am | |
| - GrandMaster Rex wrote:
- Oh Glory.
Look at that January. You've always had it.
dat january tho... My best piece of work Same with december xP Oh man xD i should really show you guys some of my older stuff... I love looking at my old stuff because it's hilarious xD And i know that i was proud of it at one point... I did go through a phase where i redrew every "cute anime couple" picture on youtube... No joke I mean, in reality, i've only been here for a year... So i haven't had as much time, Plus it's hard because my style is different.. It's not like soooo cartoony or all anime-y so it's hard to compare it to things Thank you though Oh man, speaking of drawing, I haven't been doing much lately, Sorry guys... Anyone have any ideas? |
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XLR8 147
FusionFall Name : XLR8 147 + IRON 147 Level : 36 Posts : 5882 Join date : 2010-08-21 Age : 28 FF Location : Sector V [Future :D]
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 2:52 pm | |
| - GrandMaster Rex wrote:
- This is Oli's stuff from 2 years ago:
- Even X has improved alot too even though I bet he feels he hasnt. I mean, Look at that art review: - I feel as though I've never seen those comics Oliver made, except maybe the first one. (Even though I was shocked with the likeness of Undelos that Oliver captured lol. Like seeing your FF character on TV. ) The newer comics....I must have missed them. They all look awesome, Oliver! And I don't think I've improved much. Little practice goes a short way. - Ven wrote:
- looks nice slim, just try to fix the leg, its kinda slender but other than that you would slowly improve on by practice
Hey Ven! - Gloryangel wrote:
- GrandMaster Rex wrote:
- Oh Glory.
Look at that January. You've always had it.
dat january tho... My best piece of work Same with december xP Hahahaha! LOL. I think she meant February. We've always had nothing. |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 32 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: Slim's Drawing Fri Aug 15, 2014 4:50 pm | |
| I did mean February. Dont know how that happened. |
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