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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 23 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:11 pm | |
| Okay so this fanfic is after the war and is based on Brad's life and his demon and stuff and so hope you enjoy!
Introduction
Okay, so... Imagine a world full of debris and flames. Now make that world Earth. This is what I'm gonna create, if I can't stop myself. Hi, I'm Brad, Brad Omega. I'm a fourteen year old who is loud and outgoing one day and quiet and shy the next day. I have a red faux hawk, silver eyes with a bit of a red tint, and a slim muscular build (like im strong but slim and fast and quiet on feet). My favorite set of clothes is the Tech Spy set of clothes, made by my dad Aaron Omega. My dad owns a company called, Omega Corps. The company makes armor and weapons and mostly works Dexlabs, owned by one of the greatest and smartest person in the world, Dexter. Also my friend Oliver Weasel works there and is one of Dexters best workers along with Dexmina, another friend of mine. Oliver has black shaggy hair, blue tinted high tech glasses made by Dexlabs and has robot legs and feet due to a machine mishap. Dexmina has long blue hair, normal glasses and usually wheres a blue dress with a purple skirt and as I said maybe Dexters best worker. The reasonI like the Tech Spy set so much is, A. It was made for me by my dad. B. It helped me stay protected against the war with lord Fuse. And C. It always stays clean. Okay... So to talk about my blood thirsty demon self... I was born with him and no one knew. I never told anybody that I was the demon that left dead bodies all over the city covered in blood and teared to shreds, only one person, my girlfriend, Alice Cosmix. I told her when I killed her... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Flashback It was a dark night and I was the demon. My eyes turned full red and claws stained with blood in my gloves and blood dripping from my mouth from a fresh almost kill and me laughing like a maniac at the almost dead person, Alice Cosmix. When I slowly turned to normal I saw Alice and put my arms under her with tears flowing from my eyes and I started telling her I was the demon, that killed all of those people in the city and that I couldn't control it and that I really liked her that if I wasn't a demon I wouldn't have killed her and more stuff until I realised she was dead and was just staring motionless into the never ending space. I left her there and ran home and told my dad that the demon that killed all those other people killed her and that I just got away and don't know where he is now (he doesn't know im the demon and my mom died at the war with Fuse). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So do you like it?
Last edited by Undead Brad on Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:20 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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Slasher
Mugiwara no luffy
FusionFall Name : Shirou Luffy Level : 0 Posts : 2413 Join date : 2010-10-25 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:09 pm | |
| Perfect story was, but whats with the demon killing people in city? |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 23 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:13 pm | |
| hes a blood thirsty demon so he kills people in the city for blood. |
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Slasher
Mugiwara no luffy
FusionFall Name : Shirou Luffy Level : 0 Posts : 2413 Join date : 2010-10-25 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:17 pm | |
| Oh good, he would kill bella? |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 23 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:19 pm | |
| maybe... i might put chapter 1 today |
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Dragoon
Dragoongamer86
FusionFall Name : Zane Sunboskov Level : 36 Posts : 4292 Join date : 2012-06-11 Age : 25 FF Location : The little secluded island in Bravo Beach thinking
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:15 pm | |
| good story, a bit, demented if you can say that |
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hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Jul 25, 2012 11:15 pm | |
| X I TOLD YOU WE GOT COMPETITION OUR BRO STORY HAS TO BE POSTED HERE! Ill leave it to oyu... If you want that is... |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 12:53 am | |
| I though dexter made tech sets |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 23 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:02 am | |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:29 am | |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 33 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:54 am | |
| You can add my characters if you want. You can be a little non-canon with them if you want.
Just try not to make them TOO non-canon though.
As far as your backstory, it's very interesting. I guess there would be more than one weapons building and advanced technologies industry in the world of FusionFall other than Dexlabs and Mandark Industries.
I will see if I can adapt some of your backstory into my comic. I kinda already had Bradley planned out a MUCH different way; of course I was still working on the kinks, but I don't want to make this solely about ME and MY story. My story is about ALL of us and being that you and The Hom have revealed how you'd like your backstories to be.........
I guess.......
Revisions are due now..... :sigh:
Don't worry. I'd be more than glad to rewrite it. I just got to fuse a bit of you guy's genius with a bit of my own. |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:28 am | |
| Pretty neat starting |
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Slasher
Mugiwara no luffy
FusionFall Name : Shirou Luffy Level : 0 Posts : 2413 Join date : 2010-10-25 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 9:58 am | |
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hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:42 am | |
| Meh if you wnat a super awesome guy with a blindfold and massive angel wings to match who is also a EX-SACT Experiment with his own dark past BUT ITS NOT ABOUT ME!
But meh if you wanna use Hom use him do whatever you want with him infact... Kill him, Be pals with him... Mortal enemies its your story. Thats if you wanna... |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 33 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:20 pm | |
| I think this is The Hom's way of saying he doesn't mind if you add him to your story. |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:08 am | |
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hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:20 am | |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:22 am | |
| - HomChoi wrote:
- Nope.avi
Yes |
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hom
FusionFall Name : hom choi Level : 36 Posts : 3753 Join date : 2012-02-05 FF Location : home.
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:26 am | |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Sat Jul 28, 2012 12:34 am | |
| No I have sa shoes buahahahahahaha lol |
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Undead Brad
Undead Brad
FusionFall Name : The Cypher Level : 0 Posts : 3182 Join date : 2012-04-12 Age : 23 FF Location : The Abyss
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Aug 01, 2012 7:27 pm | |
| so this is basically the demon inside of me going inside of me! |
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Angelic Demon
Kyle Comet
FusionFall Name : Mace Kenhero Level : 36 Posts : 2752 Join date : 2012-08-01 Age : 29 FF Location : In your shadow stalking you.....
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Aug 01, 2012 7:44 pm | |
| awesome blood lol |
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Tentegen
FusionFall Name : Jazz "Mau" Taluring Level : 21 Posts : 6296 Join date : 2011-09-06 Age : 33 FF Location : Sustained Panic
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:05 pm | |
| - Undead Brad wrote:
- so this is basically the demon inside of me going inside of me!
Jeez. What are you trying to do? Kill me with details?? I'll have to draw the demon inside of you as something slightly simpiler due to me being as lazy as a fat cat. If you look closely, Those look like rosaries around that demon's neck..... Yes. I know. You guys don't really know what rosaries are. I'd post a pic or something but I'm on mah phone so |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Mon Aug 06, 2012 3:59 am | |
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Dragoon
Dragoongamer86
FusionFall Name : Zane Sunboskov Level : 36 Posts : 4292 Join date : 2012-06-11 Age : 25 FF Location : The little secluded island in Bravo Beach thinking
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:41 am | |
| you know i've been meaning to update my backstory, but i forgot about it on the night i was supposed to update and every night after that, and then yesterday i wanted to update, but a huge storm must've blown something out, so i had no power yesterday, in fact power came back on just this morning, but tommorow after filming i'll update it, but i'm still debating about whether or not to write the chapter after that, because due to the fact that my backstory ties in with 7 legends, i die in the ending, and because i want a happier ending rather than my death, (even though in 7 Legends 2 if a sequel is made i want to return) but still having room for a sequel, it will require that i do a major rewrite to the 7 legends ending, so i'm not sure if i want to write that chapter
Last edited by Dragoongamer86 on Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:58 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Zeroknight
Zero Knight
Level : 1000 Posts : 4671 Join date : 2012-07-03 Age : 25 FF Location : Rodeo
| Subject: Re: The life of a Demon. Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:50 am | |
| - Dragoongamer86 wrote:
- you know i've been meaning to update my backstory, but i forgot about it on the night i was supposed to update and every night after that, and then yesterday i wanted to update, but a huge storm must've blown something out, so i had no power yesterday, in fact power came back on just this morning, but tommorow after filming i'll update it, but i'm still debating about whether or not to write the chapter after that, because due to the fact that my backstory ties in with 7 legends, i die in the ending, and because i want a happier ending rather than my death, (even though in 7 Legends 2 if a sequel is made i want to return) but still having room for a sequel, it will require that i do a major rewrite the 7 legends ending, so i'm not sure if i want to write that chapter
Lol I thought you gave up on it. |
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