Time Of Day Chapter 01



"Cassey Hagleborns here wth the morning new" A young lady with brown hair announces as she looks at the camera. "We have gathered info from our resources in Japan, There are now no more wars, finally we are at peace. In other news the Baron Vaccine has rendored the last remaining diseases left in this world harmless. Mortalities are now slim, and so is natality, fewer babies have been born , no that death is highly unlikely at any age except from 90-100. Of course thanks to the Rejubination system any old ctizen will keep be turned into a teenager yet keep their memories. Local Scientists are now conducting research on Time Travel, will they succeed and help us see the past with our own eyes, or will they destroy all life as we know it?"
"Sir, The pod is ready and stable." said a young scientist in a white labcoat, his glasses would lower as he talked.
"Excellent, are we ready to begin Time Crane?" Replied an older , wise looking old man, his labcoat was a lightly saturated red.
"Well yes sir, but we have intell that there is an organization that wants to stop us." Said the young man looking frightened.
In a confident manner he replied "Don't worry, you forget every human has a powerful weapon, Excel Abilities. Every human was born with one unique ability that surpasses man, superpowers if you will. Mine none is the Eye Of Wilton, I can form eyeballs from any material and have it release lasers that can burn the flesh and bones."
The young man sighed in relief.
"Begin Operation Time Crane!" He commanded in a rash manner.
The machine lit up all sorts of lights and then the pod created a huge explosion of light. When the light faded away, there was smoke everywhere.
-"Smoke Elimination Process Activated, Now removing all smoke." announced the main computer.
"Look men, there, we've done it!" Yelled the old scientist.
A young woman was in the pod, passed out, she had black hair with blue highlights, a small tophat that was fairly well made. She had golden greeves on her feet, her skin looked as soft as a baby, Her wardrobe was that of a steam punk, she looked eightteen years old, and seemed to be of royal blood since she looked like a princess. An angelic aura.
"Sir, she's opening her eyes." Said faintly the young scientist.
Upon opening her eyes, she freaked out, she was confused, worried, now surrounded by all sorts of technology and being starred at by men in labcoats.
The pod opened up, as the scientists came closer. she tried stepping back until she reached the wall. With no other hope, she gave out a big yell.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
"What's happening sir??" said the young scientist.
Electricity was forming around her, bursting out on every scientist one by one, her eyes were tearing, she couldnt control this power, the scientists tried running away, except for the old man.
"So you really are of the royal family Shakar" said calmly the old gieser. "When I heard the daughter of the famous Shakar house, known for making generators back in the 1980's, I never expected that it was me who kidnapped you. This proves that you never will return to your own time. It must be because of what I am about to do."
He raised his hand. Like a black hole all kinds of materials were sucked then crushed into a ball white flames covered that ball and became a giant eyeball.

"Any last words, Misstress Of Electricity?" The Scientist asked.
Slash!
The old man fell to his knees. He looked up, his giant eye was destroyed.
"Sorry Old man, I'll be taking her off your hands."Said a young man with a smile, 20 years old, black hair like the night, Green eyes like emeralds, a green vest with pockets on the armsa and two white stripes, long pants and boots that were also black. "This light sword only paralizes you so you wont die, but it still hurts doesnt it."
He dropped down to where the girl was. As he layed eyes on her, her beautiful blue eyes mesmerized him, love at first sight. He reached out his hand.
"Stay away, thou expects me to trust in thee, holding such a weapon" She said in a scarred yet slightly high pitched voice.
"Please trust me, I want to save you, I heard they were bringing someone from the past to our time, I want to help you get back." he rolled the handle towrds her, as a sign that he was harmless he even bowed. He got up and reached out his hand.
"Tis better than staying in this place, fine, I'll go with thee." She said while taking his hand , they ran out of the lab and headed to the lobby.

its like 11 am, I line arted that on paint really quick to help with the image, I'll draw a scen I like later on, Probably colored, idk, I have to make a cover too, for the fun of it.lol

you know how i said it sounds cool? it is.

zoe bioshine wrote:

you know how i said it sounds cool? it is.

I dont deserve such kind words.



lol jk Thank you zoe

and nowwwww with a cover page at the top I might colr it later, or eventually lol.

that is a good drawing. im learning to draw like that.

zoe bioshine wrote:

that is a good drawing. im learning to draw like that.

Oh really? I know the best tutorial man. Mark Crilley.

With just one video, you feel amazin

thanks! this is gonna help. i have a christmas break assignment i forgot about until that tutorial. i need to draw me some boots!

zoe bioshine wrote:

thanks! this is gonna help. i have a christmas break assignment i forgot about until that tutorial. i need to draw me some boots!

Wooo you go then! He also does head hair how to draw eyes everything youll want to know

sweet! imma practice later then draw it on the bus on monday. postponing my home work as usual.

zoe bioshine wrote:

sweet! imma practice later then draw it on the bus on monday. postponing my home work as usual.

lol dont we all, best way to learn is to learn how to draw everybody part seperately , then when you learn that head to learning to draw the full thing

you know what i just realized? that girl on the cover, the princess person im guessing. she has my hair!

zoe bioshine wrote:

you know what i just realized? that girl on the cover, the princess person im guessing. she has my hair!

lol except you dont have blue highlights right?

... maybe ...

zoe bioshine wrote:

... maybe ...

dun dun dun.!,Q,!

I'm dead serious right now. My hair actually looks like that

zoe bioshine wrote:

I'm dead serious right now. My hair actually looks like that

Well you're not gonna like what happens between her and Keitaro important thing is, the story would make an awesome movie.

I can tell it would

zoe bioshine wrote:

I can tell it would

xP. wonder where everyone else is,

... I don't know

zoe bioshine wrote:

... I don't know

eaten by squirrels

Ok thought they got eaten by unicorns personally. Then the unicorns went to unicornitopia and rubbed it in the other unicorns faces and said haha, I ate people and you didn't!!

zoe bioshine wrote:

Ok thought they got eaten by unicorns personally. Then the unicorns went to unicornitopia and rubbed it in the other unicorns faces and said haha, I ate people and you didn't!!

unicorns eating people, seems legit

Can't argue with all that truth

yup

zoe bioshine wrote:

yup

yus

Do you want a pet unicorn??

zoe bioshine wrote:

Do you want a pet unicorn??

Make it 5 and its a deal

How about 10 unicorns??

zoe bioshine wrote:

How about 10 unicorns??

Not enough

How many do you want dude????

zoe bioshine wrote:

How many do you want dude????

Enough to have a different unicorn everyday

365? Deal

Dun Dun Dun............................Party's over lol,You guys have had a long talki walkie stuff here huh,N Zoe why u flriting lol.

SmartCraft wrote:

Dun Dun Dun............................Party's over lol,You guys have had a long talki walkie stuff here huh,N Zoe why u flriting lol.

Thnx for commenting about my story

Me? Flirt? You have got to be joking! I'm a little angel. I would never do such a thing. Maybe

zoe bioshine wrote:

Me? Flirt? You have got to be joking! I'm a little angel. I would never do such a thing. Maybe

Little Angels flrit sometimes lol.

Not this one

Lol this is owen my other account won't let me make a new name so i made a new account.Someone tell X to delte my other account.

ElectrizKid wrote:

Lol this is owen my other account won't let me make a new name so i made a new account.Someone tell X to delte my other account.

Ekid, I cannot demmand such a thing, losing smartcraft, would destroy me


ps. you still didnt comment my story :confused2:

ElectrizKid wrote:

Lol this is owen my other account won't let me make a new name so i made a new account.Someone tell X to delte my other account.

Even though I told you how to change your name.

It dosen't matter Oliver just tell X to delete my old one.N Grumps i haven't even read it n i don't feel like it.

ElectrizKid wrote:

It dosen't matter Oliver just tell X to delete my old one.N Grumps i haven't even read it n i don't feel like it.

Then why comment on my thread and get my hopes up

Because I am Lol

ElectrizKid wrote:

Because I am Lol

lol whose that on your profile pic??

GrumpyTheRam wrote:

ElectrizKid wrote:

Because I am Lol

lol whose that on your profile pic??

His name is Hiro Nakumaru from the Tv Show(Heroes)He can freeze time as you can see behind him he's frozen the war or just the Jets i put behind him.

ElectrizKid wrote:

GrumpyTheRam wrote:

ElectrizKid wrote:

Because I am Lol

lol whose that on your profile pic??

His name is Hiro Nakumaru from the Tv Show(Heroes)He can freeze time as you can see behind him he's frozen the war or just the Jets i put behind him.

You have such great taste in preferences Owen , words cannot supply enough to describe awesomeness. :rendeer:

Fits, cause that Electric Kid in your sig looks like Frozone off The Incredibles.

Oliver Zombieweasel wrote:

Fits, cause that Electric Kid in your sig looks like Frozone off The Incredibles.

You have a great eye for details oliver! Jealousy of them would not be fit

o can imagine pic 1 being a final fantasy game cover